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The Music Box

"I really liked this short story/narrative poem, it was a perfect mix of fairytale story telling and a haunting narrative. Thoroughly enjoyable and great storytelling."

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A perfect fantasy tale, warning children to listen well.

"Very clever writing that keeps you intrigued and has a very great flow for the story that is being told while keeping the rhyming scheme very tight and structured. Beautiful little twist at the end. Bravo."

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Dark fairy tale.

"Written like an old story teller, sat by a fire. I enjoyed this story and it's well worth a read."

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