Customize readability
Aa

What We Left Inside

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

What We Left Inside follows Anthony, a security guard trapped within the claustrophobic, subterranean depths of Prometheus Biotech—a highly classified government research facility. What began as a career driven by patriotic duty quickly spirals into a fight for survival when a massive containment breach decimates the facility, unleashing a wave of engineered nightmares. As Anthony leads a small squad of survivors through the facility's decaying, blood-slicked corridors, they descend to the ominous Level 5—the absolute epicenter of the breakout. The environment is a visceral crime scene of slaughtered personnel and structurally shattered walls, indicating a creature of massive proportions. While navigating this carnage, Anthony discovers the journal of Dr. Thorne, a lead researcher. The notebook reveals a devastating truth: the facility's main test subjects, designated as "C-H's," were actually Chinese prisoners of war. In a reckless bid for global dominance, the government subjected these hostages to grotesque genetic experiments. The journal also warns of "Patient Zero," a terrifying, bulletproof alpha predator possessing a hive-mind intellect capable of stalking its prey with calculated malice. Reeling from the realization that he was a pawn for a ruthless regime—and harboring bitter resentment toward a supervisor who abandoned him only to die a brutal death when the elevator plunged to Level 8—Anthony experiences a profound crisis of faith. He chooses to hide the invincible nature of the beast to keep his squad from losing all hope. Chapter 4 culminates in a heart-pounding cliffhanger. Breaking the suffocating silence of the Level 5 hallway, a towering, pale-white, gore-drenched entity steps out of the shadows. Grinning with sickening intelligence, Patient Zero unleashes an inhuman, deafening scream, trapping the mortal survivors in a direct standoff with a literal freak of nature. Chapter 5, titled Death's Door Knocks, is set to pick up right at this high-octane flashpoint.

Status
4mo ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Beginning Of Hell

It all started in a lab. The creature of hell itself. We didn’t mean to create it, we were just testing out an old experimental virus. We even tested it on a human being. That was a huge mistake, we didn’t know what the virus even did. It was too old to tell, yet too undiscovered to find results without testing it itself. After we injected it into Human-298, it showed instant results.

The test results were incredible at first. Super Strength, incredible speed, and very good in an increase in intelligence. Then, it got worse. The test subject’s skin turned pale, his eyes turning black. His eyes were hollowed with a red glow. Suddenly, his body elongated and grew. His arms and legs were now long, with razor sharp claws. His ears grew into a pointy shape, and his mouth elongated. Now he contained razor sharp teeth, and hair disappeared. I was staring at a bald demon-freak.

A scientist near me ran to the lockdown button, and pressed it. The alarms sounded, and security burst through the door. They were carrying weapons, and armor on them. They signaled us to get behind them, and they raised their weapons. The monster now fully grew to 8-feet, and was now scratching at the glass. Its claws were damaging the glass, and soon cracks started to form. Soon, the cracks started to get bigger and bigger.

Suddenly, the glass broke. The monster lunged at the guards, and gunshots could be heard. I ran, and so did my colleagues. Even a coward guard did the same. I looked back and can see the guards that stayed back being ripped to shreds and thrown across the room as they were firing at the monster. I kept running, and suddenly I could hear loud thuds coming from behind us. I turned around to see the monster running towards us.

We quickly passed a security gate, and it slammed shut. The creature starts banging on the blast door loudly, and we catch our breath. I get up, and start running towards the exit. I know for a fact that a blast door cannot hold for long against that creature. The guard follows me, and orders me to seek shelter while he reports the breakout to the higher-ups. I’m not listening to his pleas to find shelter, as I know that thing will hunt anything that’s not itself down.

I accidentally ran into another testing chamber, and saw local scientists with guards escorting test subjects back to their containment cell. It appears they just got done with a test that seemed ineffective. No government weapon to end WW4 I guess. We need to run more tests if we want to beat China now that they have captured all of Europe. Suddenly, one of the test subjects acted weird. I think it was Human-106 that was acting up. Suddenly, he started growling and bit into one of the scientists. The guard shot him, and he died there at the spot. The scientist said she didn’t feel good, and started to walk like she was drunk. Suddenly, she charged at the test subjects and started gnawing on one. The guard had to shoot her as well.

Then the guard watched as that test subject started biting the other test subjects, and he was soon outnumbered. He ran towards my direction, and saw me. He ran past me, and I followed him. Now I have to deal with two types of monsters. I look to the side as we run, and see Human-298 digesting that cowardly guard whole. I gasp in fear, and keep running. Human-298 sees us running, and starts chasing after us. The guard I was following looked behind us, and screamed. I guess he didn’t expect to see a creature that hideous.

I think I remember what parasite they used on Human-106. If I was correct, one of the scientists was explaining that they were gonna use a super serum that gives super strength to see the side-effects. I guess that was the side-effect, Zombie Mind. If I ever make it out alive, I will make sure that I quit this job, and go back home to my loving wife and three kids. The guard started speaking to me in German, and said: “Wir müssen in die Sicherheitszone gelangen, mein amerikanischer Freund!” I don’t truly understand what he said, but I think he told me to get to a safe zone.

We keep running, and the intercom starts to speak: “Attention all personal, please evacuate the facility. I repeat, evacuate the facility. The lower levels have been breached by two unknown viruses. Please evacuate the facility.” This intercom cuts out, and I keep on running. I can’t stop now, that crazy monster is after me. I can hear its footsteps as it runs after me getting louder and louder. I don’t know where is a good place to hide, I think a small enclosed space would be perfect. I tell the guard to follow me, and he listens.

We run down a hallway with the monster after us, and we bust through a doorway. The room is small, but empty. There is no way that monster can get in here. I slam the door shut, and we hide in the office room. I tell the guard, “Credo che siamo al sicuro, amico mio tedesco.” The guard looks at me, and says: “Es tut mir leid, dass ich dachte, du wärst Amerikaner.” “Du sahst amerikanisch aus.” I don’t really understand what he is saying, as I don’t know that much German. Me and the German guard are now stuck in a small office, with a crazy monster right behind that door.

I can hear the monster pounding on the door, but with what? It’s feet? It’s claws? I don’t know how we can get out of this mess. I hope the facility can secure it, I’m just tryna get back to my loving family. I can’t handle this, and I freak out. The guard slaps me, and commands me to get myself together. I just don’t know how I’ll be able to survive these Monsters.

Let The_Wildcard know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Lisíchka

WendyHines: I really liked how the characters grew but stayed true to themselves. It is refreshing to have a female heroine that doesn’t need to be saved and instead does some saving of her own. Also, a partner that treats her as a fully functioning, strong adult woman. Well done!

Read Now
The Mendaxian Pact

lena: The story is well written and keeps you hooked.The blood drinking theme is a bit cringey but the characters are adorable.

Read Now
IVAN

ohoney2004: I liked this novel. Good story line, interesting plot and characters.

Read Now
THE YIELD

Elisa_sims: Hey! Sorry if I'm bothering you by reaching out here.I'm Elisa Sims, a fellow reader. I came across your story and wanted to ask if you'd ever be interested in custom artwork, concept art or illustrations for it. I love helping authors bring their worlds to life and visuals can be a great way to att...

Read Now
Avenging Angels MC-Book 1

Chelle: Amazing read! Highly recommend

Read Now
The Orc's Pet

Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾

Read Now
Beyond the Ice Wall

Dee: I'm enjoying this read immensely. I would recommend this to readers who enjoy suspenseful romance. At this point, I can't find a reason to rate less. Can't wait to see how the story plays out.

Read Now
Rules of Fatals

JMBB: Really good story and great concept

Read Now
The Moon's Weapon : the cursed mate [ MOVING TO GALATEA]

klsgal61: Loved this book, great story of the two, Barbara & Alastor

Read Now