The May

Shadow

11 chapters read

lessons

"i really like the character may, and at the same time feel bad cuz she is going through so much and yet she doesn't give up."

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Slowdown

6 chapters read

Me the author btw >,>

"I'm the author so I definitely I will give myself 5 star however I too know my grammar,punctuation is not good but I'm sure you will like the story >,<"

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Moon Mist

1 chapters read

Nice

"The Vibes are quiter, calmer, letting the story breath instead of rushing. The writing is also good in a way that fits with even a beginner's requirements.."

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Sonata Cha

1 chapters read

Sweet

"Wow, my heart goes out to May. She's carrying so much on her shoulders, at such a young age. But, her resilience is really comforting. The first chapter has so much potential, I love it."

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love it so much

"i love the story so much. the plot is amazing, so is the writing style. i am so looking forward to reading the rest too. i recommend to anyone who loves emotional and mystery. love itt "

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zamuzaffar

8 chapters read

THE MAY

"The story is really captivating! I really like May’s character, and I’m so curious to learn more about her. I can’t wait to discover more about her as the story unfolds! ❤️📖✨ "

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Ella.K

10 chapters read

Love It (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

"If you’re looking for an emotional book to read that will have you crying and laughing in your bed, then this is it. (⁠ᗒ⁠ᗩ⁠ᗕ⁠) The characters are beautifully written, especially the FL, who has a lot of emotional trauma and expectations placed on her. What makes this novel even more emotional is that, at the back of your mind, you know that this happens to a lot of people in the world, and some of them actually give up because of the pressure. Author, please continue to keep up the good work. ❤️"

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