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Nice

"The Vibes are quiter, calmer, letting the story breath instead of rushing. The writing is also good in a way that fits with even a beginner's requirements.."

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Sweet

"Wow, my heart goes out to May. She's carrying so much on her shoulders, at such a young age. But, her resilience is really comforting. The first chapter has so much potential, I love it."

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love it so much

"i love the story so much. the plot is amazing, so is the writing style. i am so looking forward to reading the rest too. i recommend to anyone who loves emotional and mystery. love itt "

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THE MAY

"The story is really captivating! I really like May’s character, and I’m so curious to learn more about her. I can’t wait to discover more about her as the story unfolds! ❤️📖✨ "

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