The Ghost of my Mother

"This an excellent and very unique story. The vampire concept allows for a great deal of creativity and I love how you explored the concept that humanity can remain in the monster. There are a few editing issues like a missing word here and there, but there was very little of that, which makes the story both readable and enjoyable. Also, the main character seemed awfully young to think and act as she did in some of the early scenes, but I suppose it's possible for a child of that age to be so advanced in both mental and emotional maturity. The most important thing i think this story has is something I can only hope to have in mine, which is the ability to excite the reader to continue on and find out what happens next. To keep the reader hoping and/or just guessing about how the story will be resolved, but very eager to find out!"