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What is your opinion?
Pat
"Interesting story. Grammar needs work. The use of the word like to show emotion is dissapointing. It appears childish"
Book 1 was way better
"It was good at first but took a downturn after a couple chapter. The timelines is funny, and at this point the whole thing just reads like those reel shot movie ads. It’s just so all over the place. "
