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Virgie's Take

"Bella finally caught a break after years of grief. Wonder if she'll tell her mate that she's a millionaire."

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Found Luna

"She was hurt while her family died by monster. But going into witness perfection saved her and now she's free to join her mother pack. She finds her mate in the alpha and finds life with the pack exciting."

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Repeats

"Ther is to much repetition of what has gone on. With the store once we it then its said agin. And aging and again the same thing over and over "

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