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The Price of the Thaw

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Summary

To save the Lord of the North's life, Grace bound herself to a pact she cannot break: she may never ask him for anything. Not help. Not mercy. Not love. She fell out of the sky into his territory and was branded a spy. She survived on nothing but a mind that builds — earning a place among his deadliest commanders, and thawing a heart the whole realm believed frozen. Now the price comes due. To keep his heart beating, she must freeze her own — and let him believe she never loved him at all. The Price of the Thaw officially takes its next step toward its September Amazon release. Because of this transition, the full text has been removed from Inkitt, but the first 6 chapters will remain right here as a free sample for anyone wanting to check out the beginning. If you've been enjoying the story and want to read the rest, the complete book will be launching on Amazon Kindle Unlimited next month. I am also putting together an early reader list for those who want to grab an advance copy—you can sign up securely right here: https://forms.gle/CL5kGUVahiYFz7Pn6 Thank you all so much for reading, commenting, and supporting this journey from the very beginning. Your engagement has meant the world to me, and I can't wait to share what's next!

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Excerpt
Chapters
6
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

The Crimson Union (Prologue)

The last of the sun bled crimson and violet across the cottage window, the light already thinning, frost beginning to creep at the corners of the cold glass. Grace reached for the wall peg by the door — her hand met empty air. The wool scarf she was looking for was still on the yard line.

She crossed to her bedroom, floorboards sighing beneath her, and pulled the wardrobe open. Cedar and dried herbs rushed out — and beneath them, something quieter. Christopher’s fur scarf rested in the corner, nestled in shadow. Too fine for laundry. She’d saved it for the bitterest cold. She reached for it anyway, her fingers finding the pelt before her eyes had fully adjusted to the dark.

She settled it around her neck. The weight was solid against her collarbones. The fur cupped heat against her jaw, warmth spreading into her bones by slow degrees. Her fingers curled briefly into the collar’s edge. She turned her face into it once — then braced against the draft curling under the door.

She shouldered out into the backyard, woven basket hooked over one arm, the dry reeds rough against her palm.

The cold evening struck her square in the face. Clean and sharp, smelling of mud and thawing earth and nothing else. Her fingers numbed within moments. She cupped her hands to her mouth, breathed on her knuckles, then reached for the closest sheet on the wire. The linen had stiffened in the air — faintly damp, dragging against her grip — and she worked it free.

Then iron-shod hooves broke the quiet.

Not one horse. Several.

The sound reached her bones before it reached her ears — a measured percussion moving with deliberate weight down the alley. Grace went still. She did not breathe. Her fingers closed around the basket’s handle until the reeds bit into her palm.

Through a gap in the hanging sheets — cold and clammy where they pressed against her shoulder — four riders on armoured warhorses crowded in front of her front yard. The animals’ breath steamed in the air.

Before a single face came clear, one man dismounted. His boots struck the churned mud. The thud landed on Grace’s heart.

It was the Lord of the North. The man she had fled.

For one paralyzed second she could not move. The biting wind died in her ears. Her hands went slack. A numbness washed out the cold, and the basket slipped from her grip. The clean linen spilled into the mud.

She turned and ran for the rear door of the cottage.

The moment her boots tore through the slush, pursuit shattered the quiet behind her. Boots pounded the half-frozen earth. Steel plates clattered, trailing the sharp bite of oiled iron and frost. The Warlord closed the distance with terrifying speed. A cold flush beneath her skin. The threshold lay just out of reach. She lunged, splintered wood scraping her fingertips —

A leather-clad hand clamped around her arm.

The grip anchored her where she stood. Air locked in her lungs with a painful hitch. She turned, the metallic tang of fear bright in her mouth.

The Lord towered over her, chest heaving from the sprint, the steel of his pauldrons shifting with every breath. He had not changed a fraction since she last fled him. A muscle feathered along his jaw. Grace flinched — her shoulders drew up towards her ears, muscles locking in anticipation of a strike. The nightmares had promised it.

He stared down. The crushing pressure vanished. He snatched his hand back to his side, his gauntlet clashing against his thigh, as if her thin sleeve had turned to white-hot iron.

The sudden release threw Grace off balance. She stumbled back a pace, her heel sliding deep into the freezing slush, and caught herself against the rough cottage wall. Her opposite hand flew up to cup the flesh he had just released — rubbing away the phantom heat of his glove.

At the courtyard’s edge, the warhorses shifted. Their hooves tore into the frost. Thick reins creaked as the Vanguard reacted.

Grace did not look at them. The bitter wind clawed at her cheeks. She kept her eyes locked on the Lord.

“Why are you here?”

His words fractured into a hollow rasp, barely cutting through the scent of woodsmoke drifting from the cottage eaves.

Grace stared at him, her fingernails biting into her palms. Her mind went blank. The ringing in her ears drowned out all reason, and she had no answer to give him.

While she swallowed against a dry throat, struggling to form a single word, his boots crushed the slush. He took one careful step towards her.

Grace stepped back. Her boot slipped in the mud, calves burning as she forced the distance to hold between them.

A muscle ticked in his jaw. Shock flashed across the Lord’s face, shattering her paralysis.

The realization struck like cold water. She stood before the Lord of the North — and she had failed to show a sliver of deference. Her trembling hands flew to her wool skirts, cold fingers smoothing the stained fabric against her thighs. She lowered her head, dropped her gaze to the wet earth, and sank into a shaking bow.

“My Lord.”

The silence pulled taut, stretching like a bowstring until the frozen air threatened to snap.

“Have you forgotten me?”

The question seized her lungs.

A cold sweat broke across her nape. He remembers. He was asking if the Ancient Shrine had scoured her mind the way it had destroyed his.

Lie. Tell him you don’t know him, and he might just leave.

But the lie died as ash in her throat. She could never deceive him — and sprinting for the cottage door the moment he appeared had already betrayed the truth. The trap had already snapped shut.

Grace kept her eyes fixed on the half-frozen mud, a tremor working through her jaw, and shook her head.

“Then gather your belongings.”

The fracture in his tone vanished. The unyielding command of the Lord returned — low, certain, vibrating with an authority that left no room for debate.

The chill seeped past the thin wool of Grace’s sleeves, settling deep into her bones.

“I shall not permit the woman who saved my life to toil in the mud of a merchant’s settlement.” He delivered the words as absolute law, the leather of his gauntlets creaking as his fists clenched at his sides. “You are returning to the keep.”

She closed her eyes against the ash-scented wind. The darkness behind her eyelids offered no escape. She opened her eyes. The Vanguard remained — a wall of dark steel. The warhorses waited, their hot breath pluming in the freezing air.

She could not run, could not overpower him. But she would not be dragged back to the iron walls of the Manor.

“As you command, My Lord.” Her voice hollowed into a scraping rasp. “Please — allow me a brief moment to make myself presentable.”

The tension left his frame in one misty exhale. He unclenched his jaw, his chin dropping a fraction, and stepped back to give her room.

Grace turned and walked into the dim warmth of the cottage.

Inside, she moved without hurry, her heartbeat drumming a fatalistic rhythm in her ears. Her numb fingers fumbled with the rough canvas strings at her back. She untied the muddy apron, letting the wet fabric hit the floorboards with a dull thud. She dragged both hands down the front of her worn dress, smoothing the coarse weave. Reaching up, she pulled her hair back from her face and tied the loose strands away from her neck.

She was not packing her belongings. She was preparing for the block.

When she stepped back over the splintered threshold into the fading crimson light, the fur scarf remained tightly wrapped at her throat.

Grace walked past the Lord, her thin boots breaking through the courtyard crust. The scent of wet earth and hot warhorses hung thick in the air. Alexander, Bryant, and Christopher sat mounted and waiting, the leather of their saddles creaking under their armoured weight.

She lowered herself, her knees sinking into the freezing mud. The icy slush soaked through her wool skirts, biting at her skin, but she held her back straight, her chin level, her posture immaculate.

“I cannot obey your command to return.”

Her voice carried across the suspended silence without a single tremor.

Her bare hands rose to her collarbone. Her cold fingers gripped the dense fur of Christopher’s scarf, pulled it away in one tearing motion, and let it drop with a dull squelch into the mud.

The bitter air seized her neck. The dying sun cut directly across her skin — a sharp slash of crimson light against pale skin, vivid as a gaping wound before a blade ever fell.

“If my refusal displeases you, My Lord,” she said as she fixed her gaze on the polished steel resting at Alexander’s hip. “Order your Vanguard to draw their steel. Execute me here.”

She squeezed her eyes shut. The suffocating shadow she had fled would never catch her. She would pay with her blood first.

She waited in the hush. She kept her chin raised, her muscles locked and braced for the whistling descent of Alexander’s steel. But the only thing that struck her skin was the howling wind of the North—the same gale that had torn the sky open and dropped her into this brutal world.

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