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A highlanders promise

"Beautiful story with great characters, would love to find out what happens next."

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Highlander's Promise

"I found the time travel was very much to my taste and found the whole thing very alluring. It was interesting and kept me reading the whole time."

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Outlandish

"So this immediately made me think of the current TV series that's based off of a romance novel, called "Outlander". The names are a little similar. I really loved how different yours is. I only have one suggestion. When Scottish people talk, they don't use terms like the English. They say "yer" rather than "your" and "kin" other than "understand". I'd definitely do some research on how they speak so that they seem more real. Other than that, I can't wait to read it. The flow was great and the main character definitely has my attention!"

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Where's the rest of the story?!

"It's been a year since the last update which means I started an unfinished story. Wth! "

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