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Ms Clumsy

What is there for a girl in no need of anything but the whirl of romance and all that? Just walking down the corridor is too much for Ms Clumsy. I thought it lacked the potential of the two friends fighting over the meat the reality of friendship tested but was wrong. I do not think it is hilarity but it made me smile.

Sunlight

it is a good story it begins well it is engrossing it is well written for some typos only there is action there is adventure it is a lovely warm feeling and hostility at the same time. It has action packed well what can I say?
Well done and keep on.

Behind the Mask

I must say if you like a mystery with a lot of action then this is the story. The main characters are all good some even too good. I make it a winner and then I may be wrong. I am not going to rob you of making the decision. This is a reader's book, not a writer's book. You just fasten your seat belts and lift off.

Shadow Walker

The writing is intense and very like what I would like to read more of and if there was something more of the story I would like it even more. There is something tragic about the story. Wish the writer well with the effort of writing and all that. But wish it was longer.

Maybe She Was Lucky

I am thinking about domestic violence, and it is always never right but what is wrong is that the seeming and the not believing are the same. We ignore it at our peril. We abuse the victim at our leisure, and we leer at others who appear to speak about it. I say this is unnerving.

Helping others

It is a good story it is well captivating but the things in it are also unique. Lovely that someone so young can become that and be so good. Being a helpful person with two jobs as a waitress and as an angel is very unique..
It is questionable these days what the young find to work on and this is a job anyone can aspire to. It is a good story without much effort but a good story that is told well. Taken with a pinch of salt.

A Book Of Poems

It is a very short book the idea of immigration and why we leave is a very big idea. But not discussed as it is ongoing I felt it is an idea about an ideal world of quests.
I loved the introduction and that made me read the poems.

We will love each other

The what is this game inside this story is something terrible and something nasty. I can read it but not straight out. There is something tingling up my spine something that is nasty like creepy crawlies. Because this is done to a child this is a done for child. Not a light read it takes one by surprise because what the kid goes through makes him nasty too. Secretive and insincere and always thinking about himself and his world. Eventually we know that is his flaw that is what makes him so mean with the observations he is okay but does the other people affect him in any other way?

On The RUN

It is a lovely beginning of a plot and the liquid poetic language is silver to the tongue. But it is incomplete unfinished and left me gasping for the things which would make a story more of the same because the startling start and like a race which had began it is unfinished.

In the Mind

It is a horror story and there is much horror in there. I loved it there was gore and a twist and twisting around it is one of those horror stories which are great to read round the fire at Christmas and near the times when one wants to heal.

A Murder Foiled, A rescue

Why is it happening is the rivalry between the inheritor and the second brother but when it comes to the youths there is hatred most pitiful and I think that is the pity of it all. That one can kill someone and not even think about it. It is chilling it is unnerving it is obviously the thing to do back than and the manly thing to be. But the thing is it is frightening.

Jezebel Went

I did enjoy this book it is so dark and at the most a enlightening tale of dark humours which go unmolested can catch one unaware.
Social norms and the norms of mad people highly irregular and not connected to the real people who live and breath and can react without getting into trouble. Obviously the main characters were not normal.

My Fourth Encounter

I liked this story I love the way the authority of the author makes this spell look real and compact I believe in the story in the characters although it is absurd. Anyway he falling for Jane Austen is a bit absurd because she gay. and a little dead.

Dreams are not romantic

Very into such stuff. It is very nice and not nasty which is what we want from life. Youthful vigour and all and there is something like piety which is not nasty. Well told.

Jungle Series

It is a horrid story a horror story in the usual genre and I love it but the thing is most of it has the plot of previous generations which we are used to. But it is still lovely to read.

His stranger

Reminded me of Sarah Kane's style a wonder new talent.

Graffiti

I too liked it but needs to be expanded to make it work in a more powerful way. At the moment it works only at one level.

Becoming Normal

I would love it if the writer went into more details then about the Autism and the suffering and the exclusions and all that but the thing is most of the authors sit back busking in the current literary efforts of the past.
The thing is I might be wrong.

In the gap

In the gap seems to be derivative in fact seems to be all the horror stories we ever watched and it is the strength and the weakness of it. I mean I did like the character but found him not to my taste because felt nothing for his interests I do not know the reason I do care for them but they seem to be living in a film. Having seen so many movies one is not able to focus on the reality of a character and a situation which left me wandering when the end would come. This is only me I am only one reader.

Stolen reluctant mate

Enjoyed it better the second time.

Love of my life

It is a great error to think that in India there is no mystery and this is a story which is a mystery and a romance we all hope because of the name why is she so revolted by the husband's name is the mystery and it goes all the way through which is very well done. Without being preachy there is the mystery where ever one goes because Sherlock Holmes was invented in England does not make them the only ones with mysteries.

Moonflower hotel

I thought this horror story was highly horrific and I enjoyed it very much indeed. It was based on something like most of its kind on being trapped but the horror was very intense and very real and the working towards the damaged humans and the non existence of perfection a theme which I enjoyed was also the usual genre of the story. It made me realise that there is horror out there. Mostly I thought the devil thing and the ghost linked well. To find out if there is not enough romance left for it was highly romantic too. A bit like Stephen King and some of the usual Friday the 13 as well as Misery and all that but there is not much else but that it is a fine story. The progression of the story through history and the cruelty of parents and the other side which said the parent was unusual and even made one realise that telling stories to impressionable children can be bad.

On December 22

Totally believable uncanny most sinister and all about gun shooting and all that. I needy for stories this is a gritty one with amazing love and truth for the world we believe we will never have. That we believed would not happen that gunning down innocent people and children being involved in that. It made me angry it made me twisted and it mattered the truth is most of us live through something like that these days and many people would like to think they might like to know what to do about that sort of thing if it does happen. What is a long story to do? But it is a good story it has a good gay theme it is all about to explode and it does. What mattered was it was totally believable.

November Rain

It is edgy gritty and realism mixed with the same type of characters which are youthful and fun but these are all damaged which is interesting. I thought personally they felt right and it made me feel for them as characters in a real drama living their desires thwarted and made small and they did the right and the wrong all in all much reading needed to understand and make sense but a joy to see realism done properly.

Hell castle

I enjoyed reading the dynamics and the connection between family life and the demoniac world but thought the chapters had been done twice because chapter 17 and 18 seemed identical? I might be wrong. But the story is amusing even amazing the thing about the lizard and the dragons and all that and the missing parents and not knowing all is great. But the thing was it is a fairy tale mixed in with the Harry Potter themes and all that. The good thing was it is worth reading and there is too much in it that is good. School family and all that? The thing is when there is nothing but that in the world what do we do as older readers? Is it geared towards youthful readers?

Scarlett Sun

Amazing story amazing personality the mind of a killer it is amazing to see what we do know about killers today. Is it a string of crimes she does in pursuit of some revenge towards society that is what the phone call was about? I wanted to know the reason she did such a thing. There is almost this absolute hell of not knowing that her blinded mother was the cause of her killing that man. But does she go on to better deeds? Or worse? I want to care for this woman but there is not much to care about the thing is we all have things done to us do we go and kill afterwards no it is a good story but a thrilling story a story without much morals. Do killers have morals anyway?

Alex and the Mad world

I found the story a thrilling experience not difficult but almost uncanny in the genre. I found the style taut and grand there is talent here and there is a dedication to science which I find pleasing. I found that the plague and its people could have been the beginning what and what happened to them daily minutely hourly their fears if only it were longer but if not the second story should be even better. If one is not into writing longer for some reason then one must not force oneself. But I was tantalised I wanted more. Because the author has imagination he can take the setting and make it come alive.

Abandon Humanity

I would love to see more of it and loved the way it was handled the things a youth does. What did it mean is the whole thing and it is nice to see it unfold more of it please more the reasons and why they relocated is it just school or is there something else as well the relationship between the siblings is it so good? Where do they go from there? What happens to them is the breath like it lies ahead. I loved the descriptions and the dialogue was good.

Twice the charm

Nothing seems to touch them time or anything the along the way life is there the momentum of family life even after years apart. What does it make me do? I loved the acts I loved the plot but the thing was nothing much else .

Hidden Feelings

This is a simple tale written well told adding to something if nothing. It has a technical brilliance a style but what is so catching about it is the story telling. Almost as simple as a Mills and Boon yet added to this are the children. I want to see more. More of what I want more of the brain for the technic is there and all that writing is there the story is there but what about love stories are they simple or simpler?

The Good Missionary's Wife

It is very well thought out and told in a realistic dramatic style some of the language is so believable and the style is consistent. The plot line is basically very well tangled and bold and told in today's rites. But the twists and turns and I am dying to see if they will or won't do the actual deed to the Missionary. The very idea that such places as servitude of slavery and what it means to be no one and then to find love even if she is not as nice or naughty or whatever but we all must find a way.

Meant to Be

It is all about love and kindness and good worthy things winning in the end. Emotionally very charged and very nice to feel people over coming their circumstances.
I also thought too much like a feel good magazine style.

Slash and Burn Society

I loved this tale whatever for I do not know I just loved it. The twists and turns and the terminology of the gang and the images of murders done and done again the psychology of the murdered and the murderers and all the aspects of what happens to dysfunctional people when they decide they want to inflict pain.

Sweet and Bitter

I thought it flowed well and there is life in there. I thought the cigarette beginning is the one most Turkish writers use and it might be slightly over done. But keep writing because the scenes are like fresh and branded with the life of the things and to create scenes is more difficult than you think.

Once Upon A time In terra Hill

I thought the story had the elements of Lord of the Flies about it because of the many dysfunctional memories and the way it was handled was delightful. The mother who was also a thinker and the grandmother who was a woman who was divorced which was unusual in her day the details were amazing.
The sweet hearts were touching.

The Princess Child

This is a delightful beginning to a story a folk tale a fairy tale. I thought it is a promising beginning I would love to see how it ends? The wolves coming upon the child was very frightening.

anger issues

I loved the story with the Mexican Spanish background and all the tensions and all the things which makes for a teenager. I loved the way the issues of this and that the break down of relationships. But thought the difficulty was that she picked up where she left off immediately she went back to the area which is quite distressing for me she did not fight she did not have to.
So was it only the area which was bad and not her?

Two Units

The good story and the Indian background with characters taking in more than they can cope made it the story that is so real in the time of today in the other land called India. I am intrigued how did it happen what went wrong with the character James? I want more to read so that I can smell the storyline form judgments and make it the character studies inside me.
I thought it may be that there was too much inside the character's heads and then the whole thing is not escapism it is the grim reality of a poor girl fighting for her family and losing it.

Wandering House

It appears as if this story is not yet written. It is a synopsis of a story but it is such a good idea that it has given me leave to criticise the story. The atmosphere could not be more intense and the growing relationship or nonentity of the souls are very nicely placed. Please write the story.

Fiction Or Fantasy

I just thought it was all very nice and sensual but too involved as this is erotica then of course it would be too involved. But the plot line much to be pitied got lost. The two main characters were thinking about each other and left it too late to assume their posts.
I did not think about them or want to know anything further and then realized the post must go to someone who is able to consume this type of literature.
I am sorry to hurt anyone's feelings as if they are bothered as they are half way to their bed and unable to sleep.

Fire and Air

This is a very interesting take on witches and seems to be working because it is nearing that time of Halloween. These are witches who pack lunches and do things. Like everyday stuff. But are obsessed with their herbs. Not the types you meet on the hoodlum trial?
We love witches and they love each other but each to their own I will take a broomstick and we can fly into the magic of this story. Well done.

Savanah Smile

I did not feel that the story had enough depth. It was as if the story was told by a false friend and it was masking something unpleasant. Maybe it was the style of writing. The chapter was so long and there was an element of wit and cadence that I liked but overall it is not for me.
It is like a muck up and done with some deft hand but the thing is it could have made me feel more than it did. I thought the characters were a bit wooded and there appeared to be something I had missed. The ambition of the writer must be respected.

Fate's Storm

I thought it would make me feel like everything else but the thing was this was a good read and mostly I enjoyed this. I felt the mysterious men and the girl in there holding for dear life was so naturally done. I was expecting and most of the time my expectations were met. But the development would be interesting. The author has historical know-how and is able to weave a tale.
There is some expertise that is there and I wonder what type of degree she has? Left me feeling green with envy.

21 Days

It is an idea but it is a good idea and somehow almost like a cinema idea. It made me sense the author's writing is brand new and does need development. As the characters are immature and they do have not much but cheerio on their brain. When they are speaking the main character is comparing licorice.
I feel this is a writer who is going to write a good deal of worthy work and then take it into a film.

Gothic Parables.

Stories that are Gothic in tone and are nasty reading material make me feel good. Just a note somehow they are not reality and must be injected with something. But the style aside the basic structure of the stories is nasty and pure Edgar Allan Poe the social content, They live in one's head as if they are slipping like a slippery.

Finding Fae

This is a trilogy of works very important and much to be appreciated with the wit of an author and the tact of a gentlewoman. We must adore the image of a girl driven into somewhere and nowhere. I think about it the third book is better written but then the first book is rawer. I do not know much about books but the stuff and nonsense if there and the work is pure gold.

Why You

This is a good read. It is forceful. There are technical details, and the force is powerful. I make it every bit as something promising and likely to be an author who will write a great novel. He is an author that has potential. All he needs is to take the messy bits out, and he is done.

Midnight Road

A scary story without this does not make sense. Even a tiny town like that must be able to think. Where are the amenities and all that there is none? A mad man with a wife left to die on their patch without help or hindrance, and if the children did it, where were they? Okay, a mad animal did the deed. I am almost on tiptoe with the sheriff drinking without the means to an end.
It is brilliant. The sheer brilliance is in the storytelling, but it thinks where and what it is. Somewhere when they don't see people in trouble?
In sober concern, I am almost still what did the town people do? Read the story, and you will see what I mean.

Adam's Apple

The depiction of abusive behavior that leads to other types of behavior can be addictive what one the victim does to calm themselves deal with issues that come and do not leave and why does the victim becomes marginalized? This is the beginning of the story and I think there is room to develop into other stores of knowledge on developing character and circumstances and make it so that others can learn to live with their sorrows and what it is to be alive.
It is content right now there is a story but it can be anyone's story. I can see possibilities and the trauma experiences I can see self-help groups doing the right words and that they may use the book as a resource.

Falls Kingdom

The things which werewolves and witches do are all in here. Time shifts and people age and stay youthful.
I wonder when she is wonderful or bad or honest or without much to do. There is not much to ask but the story is in tip-top condition.
it is only the beginning of the story we do not know the end. We fear we may not stay long but still it grabs us.

Beamed down Myself

The writing is like poetry and it was something that should have been longer in order to make the reader enjoy it. There is a sparseness that is not necessary. There is a title that is very interesting and but why does not the story happen?
But it is good writing. It has potential it has a way forward.

Birthday Card

Well written and somehow sad but the things which got me were the short spaced out style and the concentration on one aspect which left me wanting more. It is purely American and would give the best advice to a young author read more. Live more.

We Will Love Each other

I loved this story it is so intense so believable so naturally a writer. i find myself believing every word he or she is saying. it is so good it is like American authors on the scenes we all love. It is gritty it is earthy and it is the natural consequence of a man's inability to stand up for himself. The growing pains of an addict or the fall of that man. A success than a doomed.

Nightmare

The nightmares the way she broke things and friends leaving all are details correct. It is a lovely beginning a horror story strong in content. I would love to be immersed in the thoughts the feelings the failings of the characters. One chapter is not enough not even two.

50 Days After the Apocalypses

I am a older reader with the horror of Zombies and Apocalypses. I am almost convinced by the power relations which becomes the focus of the story. I wonder I just wonder if Zombies came upon us all how we would fare and if we end in a flat thinking about food
'But on the whole very good story and well thought of and well written fast paced and remarkable for a young writer.

Creepy Thursday's

The creepiness of the opening chapter was such a good idea and then it went to basics love making ending in a good seduction. Where did Thursdays go and when did the horror story get to? You see it did not mix well for me there has to be real meat then more meal time. Intermixed. Sorry that is a metaphor.

Hope Ridge

Very promising story I hope all goes well when writing the story. I do not agree with the Alpa and the wolf pack but it seems to be a thing we all do now. I especially liked the fine beginning. The fight scene was well done.

Look Into My Eyes

Lovely plot and some thing about the maligned profession would love to re read some day and hope for the best.
This book deserves better reader than me.

Sweet Caroline

What one might call the popular novelist with the eye for detail and the things which make for romance. A very good story as well as making us forget the lonely nights as we curl in bed hoping. Just hoping..