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Ms Clumsy

What is there for a girl in no need of anything but the whirl of romance and all that? Just walking down the corridor is too much for Ms Clumsy. I thought it lacked the potential of the two friends fighting over the meat the reality of friendship tested but was wrong. I do not think it is hilarity but it made me smile.

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Sunlight

it is a good story it begins well it is engrossing it is well written for some typos only there is action there is adventure it is a lovely warm feeling and hostility at the same time. It has action packed well what can I say?
Well done and keep on.

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My Fourth Encounter

I liked this story I love the way the authority of the author makes this spell look real and compact I believe in the story in the characters although it is absurd. Anyway he falling for Jane Austen is a bit absurd because she gay. and a little dead.

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Dreams are not romantic

Very into such stuff. It is very nice and not nasty which is what we want from life. Youthful vigour and all and there is something like piety which is not nasty. Well told.

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Jungle Series

It is a horrid story a horror story in the usual genre and I love it but the thing is most of it has the plot of previous generations which we are used to. But it is still lovely to read.

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Illness

It is a beauty wonderful English like the play which was some years back called extinction or something. I loved that too. Because I am too suffering from depression now is not the good time to be offering objective criticism to the efforts of others. I am in my own gloom.

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His stranger

Reminded me of Sarah Kane's style a wonder new talent.

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The Boy In the Purple Hat

I thought it was a good short short story strong to the point but what else can one say about the whole situation is compact complete to the point stylish.

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Graffiti

I too liked it but needs to be expanded to make it work in a more powerful way. At the moment it works only at one level.

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Becoming Normal

I would love it if the writer went into more details then about the Autism and the suffering and the exclusions and all that but the thing is most of the authors sit back busking in the current literary efforts of the past.
The thing is I might be wrong.

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In the gap

In the gap seems to be derivative in fact seems to be all the horror stories we ever watched and it is the strength and the weakness of it. I mean I did like the character but found him not to my taste because felt nothing for his interests I do not know the reason I do care for them but they seem to be living in a film. Having seen so many movies one is not able to focus on the reality of a character and a situation which left me wandering when the end would come. This is only me I am only one reader.

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Stolen reluctant mate

Enjoyed it better the second time.

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Love of my life

It is a great error to think that in India there is no mystery and this is a story which is a mystery and a romance we all hope because of the name why is she so revolted by the husband's name is the mystery and it goes all the way through which is very well done. Without being preachy there is the mystery where ever one goes because Sherlock Holmes was invented in England does not make them the only ones with mysteries.

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Moonflower hotel

I thought this horror story was highly horrific and I enjoyed it very much indeed. It was based on something like most of its kind on being trapped but the horror was very intense and very real and the working towards the damaged humans and the non existence of perfection a theme which I enjoyed was also the usual genre of the story. It made me realise that there is horror out there. Mostly I thought the devil thing and the ghost linked well. To find out if there is not enough romance left for it was highly romantic too. A bit like Stephen King and some of the usual Friday the 13 as well as Misery and all that but there is not much else but that it is a fine story. The progression of the story through history and the cruelty of parents and the other side which said the parent was unusual and even made one realise that telling stories to impressionable children can be bad.

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On December 22

Totally believable uncanny most sinister and all about gun shooting and all that. I needy for stories this is a gritty one with amazing love and truth for the world we believe we will never have. That we believed would not happen that gunning down innocent people and children being involved in that. It made me angry it made me twisted and it mattered the truth is most of us live through something like that these days and many people would like to think they might like to know what to do about that sort of thing if it does happen. What is a long story to do? But it is a good story it has a good gay theme it is all about to explode and it does. What mattered was it was totally believable.

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November Rain

It is edgy gritty and realism mixed with the same type of characters which are youthful and fun but these are all damaged which is interesting. I thought personally they felt right and it made me feel for them as characters in a real drama living their desires thwarted and made small and they did the right and the wrong all in all much reading needed to understand and make sense but a joy to see realism done properly.

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Hell castle

I enjoyed reading the dynamics and the connection between family life and the demoniac world but thought the chapters had been done twice because chapter 17 and 18 seemed identical? I might be wrong. But the story is amusing even amazing the thing about the lizard and the dragons and all that and the missing parents and not knowing all is great. But the thing was it is a fairy tale mixed in with the Harry Potter themes and all that. The good thing was it is worth reading and there is too much in it that is good. School family and all that? The thing is when there is nothing but that in the world what do we do as older readers? Is it geared towards youthful readers?

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Scarlett Sun

Amazing story amazing personality the mind of a killer it is amazing to see what we do know about killers today. Is it a string of crimes she does in pursuit of some revenge towards society that is what the phone call was about? I wanted to know the reason she did such a thing. There is almost this absolute hell of not knowing that her blinded mother was the cause of her killing that man. But does she go on to better deeds? Or worse? I want to care for this woman but there is not much to care about the thing is we all have things done to us do we go and kill afterwards no it is a good story but a thrilling story a story without much morals. Do killers have morals anyway?

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Alex and the Mad world

I found the story a thrilling experience not difficult but almost uncanny in the genre. I found the style taut and grand there is talent here and there is a dedication to science which I find pleasing. I found that the plague and its people could have been the beginning what and what happened to them daily minutely hourly their fears if only it were longer but if not the second story should be even better. If one is not into writing longer for some reason then one must not force oneself. But I was tantalised I wanted more. Because the author has imagination he can take the setting and make it come alive.

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Abandon Humanity

I would love to see more of it and loved the way it was handled the things a youth does. What did it mean is the whole thing and it is nice to see it unfold more of it please more the reasons and why they relocated is it just school or is there something else as well the relationship between the siblings is it so good? Where do they go from there? What happens to them is the breath like it lies ahead. I loved the descriptions and the dialogue was good.

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Hidden Feelings

This is a simple tale written well told adding to something if nothing. It has a technical brilliance a style but what is so catching about it is the story telling. Almost as simple as a Mills and Boon yet added to this are the children. I want to see more. More of what I want more of the brain for the technic is there and all that writing is there the story is there but what about love stories are they simple or simpler?

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The Good Missionary's Wife

It is very well thought out and told in a realistic dramatic style some of the language is so believable and the style is consistent. The plot line is basically very well tangled and bold and told in today's rites. But the twists and turns and I am dying to see if they will or won't do the actual deed to the Missionary. The very idea that such places as servitude of slavery and what it means to be no one and then to find love even if she is not as nice or naughty or whatever but we all must find a way.

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Meant to Be

It is all about love and kindness and good worthy things winning in the end. Emotionally very charged and very nice to feel people over coming their circumstances.
I also thought too much like a feel good magazine style.

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Slash and Burn Society

I loved this tale whatever for I do not know I just loved it. The twists and turns and the terminology of the gang and the images of murders done and done again the psychology of the murdered and the murderers and all the aspects of what happens to dysfunctional people when they decide they want to inflict pain.

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Sweet and Bitter

I thought it flowed well and there is life in there. I thought the cigarette beginning is the one most Turkish writers use and it might be slightly over done. But keep writing because the scenes are like fresh and branded with the life of the things and to create scenes is more difficult than you think.

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Once Upon A time In terra Hill

I thought the story had the elements of Lord of the Flies about it because of the many dysfunctional memories and the way it was handled was delightful. The mother who was also a thinker and the grandmother who was a woman who was divorced which was unusual in her day the details were amazing.
The sweet hearts were touching.

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The Princess Child

This is a delightful beginning to a story a folk tale a fairy tale. I thought it is a promising beginning I would love to see how it ends? The wolves coming upon the child was very frightening.

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anger issues

I loved the story with the Mexican Spanish background and all the tensions and all the things which makes for a teenager. I loved the way the issues of this and that the break down of relationships. But thought the difficulty was that she picked up where she left off immediately she went back to the area which is quite distressing for me she did not fight she did not have to.
So was it only the area which was bad and not her?

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Adopted by

I loved the story so warm and that is the fact of the matter was that it was written in the first person twice with such a story to win me over I asked for the little girl who is a special person and from her point of view I would have handled anything. To know that little girl is to love her and she was too good to be true too. Well most people are.

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Final Curtain.

Loved that type of poetic finalist and all about the foolishness of being interned in some hell. It has great promise it made me read on and I hope for the best for the author to find a plot. Or a character which has a someone else inside the story other than himself. Which might help to understand what makes this a beauty is the sheer force in its style.

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Is there Anybody out there?

Loved it could not decipher the last lost chapter and it did matter felt a bit cheated but then I am a dyslexic.

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New World

Fresh style about the schools we have this and that there is a good effect the past and the present and we believe but would love to read more maturity.

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Alpha's Stubborn daughter

For me it was tension and well taut and there is in the story something which is a writer responding to the plot. That makes me respond too as if the girl in the story is someone I need to avoid or know depending on my mood. I like to respond to characters in a story it makes me feel that the writer is not dried and making the point he or she can write words for he sake of it..
Although it is set in the first few chapters at school and there is a boxing and diet and all that which is normal for today's writers because everyone has the same diet and everyone needs the same things.Other than that there is not much to say.

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The Monster within

Intense interesting and surprising. I needed nothing more then a one sitting to finish it to make my day complete.

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The only difference is I'm Gay

Is this a diasopic society which has no idea what difference is? Is that the whole point of this plot? I am sorry but the correct society is when there are real obstacles and all that. I did enjoy the writing but the thing about such a society is it does not exist. I am not old fashioned and it is not tailored made for me. The thinking behind is not true, I mean when a society is ably written and ably done it is about reality at the basis of some wrong. I am saying that most people nowadays gay or straight allowed to do what they like eventually they do. We have gay marriages we have gay rights we have everything gay. So why does the writer feel that she is not included? In this story it is told as if the plot is about the truth of some strong event which she fears is about to make the plot easy for the writer. I know that the Karma today is to get on a band wagon and speak the wise words. Gay and more. I am sorry but the thought behind it does not work for me as gay marriages are now the right of every bloody European and white nation in the world.

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My Fantasy Adventure

It seems to be a world where and what and how and a reality within the mechanism of where it is not explained. I know that shop keepers were explained and all that but it is almost like a fable is it like inside the persons head or is it a game show like he said? Where what and whose reality? It is a fairy tale at the moment.

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Hear Me

My favourite poem was dark shadows and the rest were a good read the first was a passionate poem and the next one was almost as good you must be a poet and so write and read poems as they say seek good books and experiences and there is a poet coming through and then when one has enough of poetry write something like science fiction or something more lucrative there is no money to be made as a poet.

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Rhyming Stories

I was thrilled with the farmer and the other love poems and the fishing poem was grand too, What I did not find amusing was that there was not enough of the poetry it rhythmed and all that but there was to be for me a depth of feeling which was there which I wanted more in more poems. I found the comments neat and attractive and all that it should be but the facts remains it is all ? The attraction was that it was like the old English poets from Wordsworth to the present days Seamus who wrote about farmers and might be a pleasant read and there was the other thoughts which I found very prosaic the failure in my own language which eclipses me and my own writing but I found the whole experience pleasing.

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He is real after all

I think it is a good technic to be a woman but noting down everything from the point of view of someone who is a easy rider. I thought it was a good read and all it is certainly convincing and there is something I thought was magical in the first chapter.

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One Night

Is literally Mills and Boon what else do I think it has all the qualities of such writing and should be placed under romantic fiction.

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Happy e;f

I think it is good and although I am not a children's writer found it charming but there must be some obstacle to Cleo going into the places he must go to find his happy moment otherwise there might not be a story? For example another elf might be there first or something?

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HAMIKO THE WARRIOR QUEEN

It is interesting story a bit tall. But passionately told.. I liked it.

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Seven for The Secret never to be told

Quiet and funny but the thing was just too likely story I liked the rhythm and the connecting thoughts of the rhythm and the latent style of being grown up after the adventure.

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Haunting of Hillcres Manor

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a diabolical dad the heroine had and what a ineffectual father Nicholas was to leave his sick daughter in a haunted house of such violence terrified until she died. The men do not come out well they either terrify or are clumsy and it is all that I mean what is the matter with having a haunting is that there is all the deaths one needs and the children are not there to be protected but to protect. But such an interesting read and able to be read for the sheer thrill of the story alone.
Okay the ghosts do not attack the girls it is the male line it wants to destroy. That being said it is dull of the parent not to reason that if he died the child a disabled child too would die too., What does matter is that it is done and then we can do what we please with them.

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Artemis Thrace

I liked the beginning and then there was this other complications what does one do if one can wipe out things from happening and do not do good deeds and when that did not make sense I wanted to seek help. Others thought it was interesting the beginning of a masterpiece and let me speak out in defence of writing there are a lot of masterpieces. The thing was it did make sense in a odd way it mattered nothing to me but it made sense and was it weird? Of course it was a bit. But the experience was like any other thing. After the grand opening we had the similar things. I do not know why it did. The thing did make sense the writing was good but the thinking was a bit off. What made me think it was did they all have to think like Literature and behave like teenagers? That we think that people of letters have more yearnings and deeds then the common teenage idols?

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The Memory of Simon Battle

It is a superior ghost story with the only thing which jarred was her use of the name Cassidy. Otherwise thought she wrote like Susan Hill and has the genre intact is able to hold down suspense and has a way of making it believable. It was a expertly done. I wanted to find out about the past as well as the future but somehow it did not matter because it is a cocoon.

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Pranks Pajamas and pretty bad puns

I thought it was hilarious and all natural good strong fun and the fat jokes did not get me down as I can see that having a fat joke is meant to be humorous and it is not bad natured but the thinking behind it is beyond me. Why and what does it all mean it is human interest this girl who cannot study chemistry and does not live on the edge of my subconscious makes me want to eat her up.

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twelve

I thought there was some errors for example the way the teachers did not pick up about the family's predicament but on the whole it was a very good story and I enjoyed it. The thing which would have made sense to me would have been if the children stole the bottles and the money as Jon was the oldest and not the youngest he did it outside and not in. Which made me think. I know he had more issues with the mother but when one is starving stealing a few coins which would buy bread is the deal. Should the social services not have been called sooner? Vivid scenes which matter but why did the mother vomit when the child was eating? Suicidal murderess or something because she knew she was not taking care of her children yet when he is trying to eat she vomits?

The rest of the story went on swimmingly.

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That Horrible Child

I liked the stories well crafted well told and in their own way better than some stories these days on the market. I am certain that it can find a home in there somewhere. The naughty things which children do and find themselves endearing afterwards and some might find them good tools to think about. But the naughty thoughts do make fine stories and they melt into some coherent whole. I am amazed that a talented author is found in something like stories why not a novel?

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unexpected

I could weep with this story it is so good that love and marriage conquers all. That having and making babies can make a world of difficulties go away. I who have never had a child know nothing about this kind of love and that makes me sad. So the unanswered question is when one does have a child all the answers come?

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Soldier tags

Story is good and I hope the film turns out well as well as the novel.

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Nothing like a Perfect moment

I loved the story do not get me wrong the plot is sound and it is evenly paced. What I wanted to know what did happen before Luis's mum who had to have four jobs struggling and making ends meet and still saving money and proud? What and how did the poor girl land in such a situation. If only the writer would tell me what I want to know as I am hooked as everyone else is. What was a bit of a anti climax was when Maddie changed the nappy I did feel after Fan giving birth that was a bit off. But the thing was it ended well it is a story well told in parts it is super efficient., Why did not Luis believe her when she phoned him? What did it mean to him when she died because it meant nothing? Life cannot be that cruel can it?

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Monitor

It was beautiful I loved reading it wish I had somehow read it in one sitting but there was something sad about it something tragic but love and all that made it possible that ghostly goings on is my delight.

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Need Someone

So is it need or is it love and will it be okay and is there more? In hospitals this kind of love is not on. It might go on but it is almost sacrilege and it is almost indecent. The way forward is to think in terms of ethics but as there is no need we just applaud.

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Little Complications

I thought the structure like the chapters was too long for me the story is about the autism of Danny and the orphanage but the chapters do not help me. I am lost in them,

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Red Light

I really enjoyed the textures of different things in the story and how it held my attention and made me start at how little knowledge which the girl had saved her and she charmed everyone. What mattered to me was the girls and their attitudes and their whole lifestyles. The people might have been too kind towards her but as she was a naïve it might have been. I wanted to know if the gritty reality was that when Fasid takes her to his aunts and she lives there what did the neighbours think and say of course they did not know. The difficulties was for me that they would know everyone knows everyone else's business there.

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Strange Luck

It is strange luck when one wants to hear the last of the story to be told what happens next to know what did take on and who are these wonderful people in society and what do they do? They are so whimsical and look there is the stranger there is the Roger there is the father with the weak heart and the girl who wants to go to London so what happened? We are left within this stressful time and nothing bad an introduction which tells us nothing. The writing superb the characterisation lovely the thing was it did make odd sense to me. But where is it going? Please write some more.

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composition of emotional poetry

It is too short you must add to them as you go along in life like Whiteman who added his poetry in his life long writing they are uniquely poems which state states of mind. But I thought they were brilliant and all that but they made me feel that they were too short.

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A trip for Lily Louise and Jeffrey

I thought it was a bit short the writing is excellent but the whole thing was too short I wanted to get into the story a bit more a few more chapters would help me to meet you as the author and to engage more. Did enjoy it but reminded me of poetry. Do you read poems by Frank Bandgay he was a man who made Survivors possible back in the 1980's and did a lot of work with the disabled but he also wrote about picnics and did a lot of things. He then became a professional poet. This book reminds me of his style.

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Twice the charm

Nothing seems to touch them time or anything the along the way life is there the momentum of family life even after years apart. What does it make me do? I loved the acts I loved the plot but the thing was nothing much else .

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prostitute and the Pirate

I agree with everything that has been said it is a lovely story and a few more chapters and shorter chapters would make it easier to read.
I mean it is immoral but love interest and buccaneering and all about the outlaws which might be a theme to be explored? The thing was in that era the times were harsh and money meant stealing a crust and being deported to some other more beastly land. Kindness is not like we have today.

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last stand of a vampire

its hell to read.

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Adam and Evie

It is well written and the story flows quite evenly and there is somehow something strange about it that makes one read on and the thing is the story is originally told. For something so simple it is elegant and well versed in literary traditions.

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Bad Project

You see in writing circles they always say if you must write you must be bad but I do not think that is true at all. Do we read anything but the imagination or do we commit murders to know if the work is valid or true? What is writing but the true essence of human nature both the good and the bad and if we do not want the good well here is the writing here is the world here we are.

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Lucky Break

Besides from the gushing sentiments I thought the story moved well and made me feel good except when if anyone in today's climate goes to a sweet shop and stands out but he is a relative so he is welcome and everything is right for the couple and made for love? The bustling of the shops was well told and the lady in her nice clothes was well worth the loving looks but of course would she seek him out would she love him this kindly gentle man who deals in fish all day what about the smell? Dockyard and all that but of course she would deal with it how?

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The Night of the Mannequinn

I agreed with what the others said about the story I have seen countless times on film this story it is nothing new we know it and love it. But the thing was it is sheer story and that is what matters it has everything to do with try telling me what happened and why it held me I do not know because it was too gruesome maybe but that would make the end of our consciousness as good story tellers because we would want all the bad stuff all the time would it not?

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The were Human Mutt

It is a deep story strong and very interesting but the human element and the mutant element was far more intense for me and then the dress making was too many times. I mean a good story is good.

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Familial strangers

It is a very good romantic read. Well written about the army and the linguist relationships and the inter positions of the professional and the domestic.

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Cut the cord

It is about love and how love can hurt two men about their feelings towards each other. The overall things the disasters and all that because the fashion angle is so over the top I did not see it as tragic. I do not know why the repeats of fashion made me feel less for them. Maybe because that meant they were mad about fashion or maybe it was because it is overall failings of communication between them. In fact I think they communicated through fashion because they love seeing each others clothes? But overall I thought it has promise and the promise is that one needs love actual love to survive in this world that no use pretending and no use being someone one is not.

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Underfoot

I loved the story the girls story was strong the prince was like anything odd. The world well imagined the place I can feel the fear it is well conceived and plotted there I so much in it that it is awesome but the only trouble was the ever ending new character in the plot. But what was marvellous was the whole situation of this child having nightmares and not being able to react as a human being. I think when she was attacked she could not even say a word about it otherwise she too would be in the same predicament. Which is a interesting concept what would anyone else do?

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Shacking up

I loved the scene of them all drunk together and then the drama when the blazing happens it is hilarious and well thought. The thing is altogether smoother than expected.

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Branded for Life

It is a wonderful story and one which mixes all the things like fantasy/horror and romance. I loved reading it because it is readable and it makes me feel about the female situation? Marriage to a Alpha male and all that and then the feminist angle about the initiation it is wonderful it is just wonderful.

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Secrets on the wall

I think I agreed with what everyone said about there being too many characters and not being able to concentrate on one or two characters but that is what children have groups and all that. It is a bit like the Famous Five and there is all sorts going on but the writing is also like a romantic novelist in the 1980's which is what the painting has the lords and ladies and the huge mansions and the little house which has a deaf and dumb boy. it is very nicely done and yet there is too much space between emotion and what is in it. You see my problem is when one finds someone dead in bed one does not go into a adventure with one's sister. Unless it is a psychotic one. Then how can a child read a pulse and why did she. She is learning French and why is she able to be so cool about it all?

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My Halfof the Universe

As I am known for my homophobic views I loved the story anyway. I was thrilled to sense the way it opened and the way it is because the writing is stronger than anything I have read and the style is good. I think because it is in the genre of the coming of age gay lad and the world of the things which we now take for granted in Europe and not in America might be that the feeling is unique to see what goes on there what has happened why the secrecy the sister has died the lad is about to acknowledge his darkest secret.
It is horrendously dark there are dark passages when he is knocked off breathing when the news arrives his father is there almost dead at the news his grandmother who is not owning to facts is now into coffee again.
So his half of the universe is life and his sister's is death? Most interesting.

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Beauty and the Broken

You see it is a heart wrencher it is a tragedy it is like Romeo and Juliet but what are these people and what is in there for us? That is that we see the spine chilling moment when she sees someone cutting herself or themselves and then she does sit in her room alone thoughtful? The thing is what is it a psychological drama and we know you need to do is read up on all the cuttings and the Stephen king novels to be able to do it with a good will. By reading all these master works you will get to see what and why they are timeless because there is a reason behind it all.
I want reason.

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pregnant Moon

I think it is a beginning of a great family saga or eventually something momentous about the tribes or something born which is what the title is saying there is something mythological and strange about the whole thing it starts with the birth and then into childhood which is what is bizarre about the whole thing a birth and a woman giving herself the name of pregnant moon when she had a averagely happy childhood? But it makes me want to read on and become more involved with the characters.
The images were fab because the sun going into the sister's mouth the backside of the mother the father is not there but the whole thing is promising and promises to be a grand adventure.

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Keveddo Hello

Good story with the basis of a strange element. It is about the elements of which make us the servants and the masters of our own destiny. It has the strength and the purpose to be a better story and the startling things in it make the strange element.

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Chronicals of Space echoes

I loved the drama and the poetic intensity of the writing style but the streamlined plot was missed because of interference by people and characters not supported by the story the story was shorter than expected should have been longer to hold all the characters in.
But it was the writing which held the whole thing together made me want to read and there was this almost poetry and doom in it and the drama was effective.

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light world

I thought it was a powerful story and the only needed one or two things explained for example how did the two girls carry all them stones but it had the thinking it had the world and it did the story for me.

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Heart

I enjoyed the story about the demons and all that it was not a happy story about divorce really and the final climactic get together. It was raunchy and racy. I think someone else should read it because it is possibly very commercial.

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Highlander's Promise

I found the time travel was very much to my taste and found the whole thing very alluring. It was interesting and kept me reading the whole time.

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Bubbles

I found the story had me but I wanted to know more in depth analysis of the narrative and I think for a story it was good even excellent but I might have wanted a novel which it was not. But it had clarity and it had drama.

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Girl in Pain

I thought the chapters were short. The thing with me is the same story keeps on popping up I know everyone is young but is the school the only background which we are going to get for a story which is about love or something? But the writing was brilliant nad everything was okay.

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