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Sunlight

it is a good story it begins well it is engrossing it is well written for some typos only there is action there is adventure it is a lovely warm feeling and hostility at the same time. It has action packed well what can I say?
Well done and keep on.

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soulful

A collection of poems which sparkle like diamonds and give one uplifting thoughts about hurt about life and there is this spring in it which sets it alight.

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Dark paradise

I thought it was a very interesting aspect of being in a forever school when your parents jobs take you round and round and the displacement which happens lose of friends and all that how everyone becomes a stranger and you don't belong in a pack. Her infatuation for the boy in the last few paragraphs is pure teen and it is lovable and that is what girls do. I wanted to read on.

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The Princess Child

This is a delightful beginning to a story a folk tale a fairy tale. I thought it is a promising beginning I would love to see how it ends? The wolves coming upon the child was very frightening.

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Palace Guard

From the point of view of both the amnesiac and the doctor and how well they interact or should do this is a story which is starting to make me believe that adults do behave. The story is nicely exploited the shock is genuine and the circumstances is real. I think it is a good story with the writer able to cope with the tensions and the doubts which diagnosis does bring. I am only still reading it but there is no doubt in my mind that it is likable and the characters will bring me shocking revelations.

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Dreamy reality

I am going to be very frank, this is a not a novel but a sheer sci-fi which is romantic but is nothing to do with the thinkers which is what I need as a mature person. I know it is abominable to need thinking behind science and love but then it is my only thing which bothers me.
I think I agree with the too much description and all that. I think it is a novel in progress keep working on it and tell me as a reader the what how and why and what for they are in there doing what they are doing?
I started out as a science fiction writer the editors said my characters were the only distinctive thing about the whole thing.
When that book the Compass was written the author said he knew nothing about the subject and then read up on it. I know it is hard work to do the graft. I have been there I know the graft and I am still learning the graft.

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anger issues

I loved the story with the Mexican Spanish background and all the tensions and all the things which makes for a teenager. I loved the way the issues of this and that the break down of relationships. But thought the difficulty was that she picked up where she left off immediately she went back to the area which is quite distressing for me she did not fight she did not have to.
So was it only the area which was bad and not her?

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Branded for Life

It is a wonderful story and one which mixes all the things like fantasy/horror and romance. I loved reading it because it is readable and it makes me feel about the female situation? Marriage to a Alpha male and all that and then the feminist angle about the initiation it is wonderful it is just wonderful.

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Secrets on the wall

I think I agreed with what everyone said about there being too many characters and not being able to concentrate on one or two characters but that is what children have groups and all that. It is a bit like the Famous Five and there is all sorts going on but the writing is also like a romantic novelist in the 1980's which is what the painting has the lords and ladies and the huge mansions and the little house which has a deaf and dumb boy. it is very nicely done and yet there is too much space between emotion and what is in it. You see my problem is when one finds someone dead in bed one does not go into a adventure with one's sister. Unless it is a psychotic one. Then how can a child read a pulse and why did she. She is learning French and why is she able to be so cool about it all?

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My Halfof the Universe

As I am known for my homophobic views I loved the story anyway. I was thrilled to sense the way it opened and the way it is because the writing is stronger than anything I have read and the style is good. I think because it is in the genre of the coming of age gay lad and the world of the things which we now take for granted in Europe and not in America might be that the feeling is unique to see what goes on there what has happened why the secrecy the sister has died the lad is about to acknowledge his darkest secret.
It is horrendously dark there are dark passages when he is knocked off breathing when the news arrives his father is there almost dead at the news his grandmother who is not owning to facts is now into coffee again.
So his half of the universe is life and his sister's is death? Most interesting.

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Beauty and the Broken

You see it is a heart wrencher it is a tragedy it is like Romeo and Juliet but what are these people and what is in there for us? That is that we see the spine chilling moment when she sees someone cutting herself or themselves and then she does sit in her room alone thoughtful? The thing is what is it a psychological drama and we know you need to do is read up on all the cuttings and the Stephen king novels to be able to do it with a good will. By reading all these master works you will get to see what and why they are timeless because there is a reason behind it all.
I want reason.

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pregnant Moon

I think it is a beginning of a great family saga or eventually something momentous about the tribes or something born which is what the title is saying there is something mythological and strange about the whole thing it starts with the birth and then into childhood which is what is bizarre about the whole thing a birth and a woman giving herself the name of pregnant moon when she had a averagely happy childhood? But it makes me want to read on and become more involved with the characters.
The images were fab because the sun going into the sister's mouth the backside of the mother the father is not there but the whole thing is promising and promises to be a grand adventure.

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Keveddo Hello

Good story with the basis of a strange element. It is about the elements of which make us the servants and the masters of our own destiny. It has the strength and the purpose to be a better story and the startling things in it make the strange element.

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rainbow

I also saw the film and thought this story was super and the writer had the characters good and the twist in It was good as well.

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the Butcher's handmaid

A lesbian love story with Greece thrown in and all the thinking behind slavery what else does one want or need for autumn?

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Chronicals of Space echoes

I loved the drama and the poetic intensity of the writing style but the streamlined plot was missed because of interference by people and characters not supported by the story the story was shorter than expected should have been longer to hold all the characters in.
But it was the writing which held the whole thing together made me want to read and there was this almost poetry and doom in it and the drama was effective.

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light world

I thought it was a powerful story and the only needed one or two things explained for example how did the two girls carry all them stones but it had the thinking it had the world and it did the story for me.

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Heart

I enjoyed the story about the demons and all that it was not a happy story about divorce really and the final climactic get together. It was raunchy and racy. I think someone else should read it because it is possibly very commercial.

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Highlander's Promise

I found the time travel was very much to my taste and found the whole thing very alluring. It was interesting and kept me reading the whole time.

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Bubbles

I found the story had me but I wanted to know more in depth analysis of the narrative and I think for a story it was good even excellent but I might have wanted a novel which it was not. But it had clarity and it had drama.

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Fated Rising

I loved the way the language flowed. There is a intensity and naturalness about the tale and the thing just made me feel somehow good. The story is good, Intricate plot, writing style is good but some spelling needs to be done but I do not know if intentional but thought the overall affect added to this. I am no use at grammar but the thing is thought it good.

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