Inkitt
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Lines of Code, Flavours of Fate

"First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed this short story. I did find the single line paragraphs a little uncomfortable to read as it didn’t flow but the content was amusing and sweet. For me, the ending didn’t feel like an ending, it just stopped. I understand the implication of the final chapter but just felt it needed another couple or so. "

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Best ever .. funny romantic everything

"It's very romantic and interesting... You couldn't wait to read next chapter "

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