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What is your opinion?
ines of code flsvors of fate
"????? What kind of ending is this. You've done a great job with the story and the writing but without an ending its not a story anymore. very disapointing."
Lines of Code, Flavours of Fate
"First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed this short story. I did find the single line paragraphs a little uncomfortable to read as it didn’t flow but the content was amusing and sweet. For me, the ending didn’t feel like an ending, it just stopped. I understand the implication of the final chapter but just felt it needed another couple or so. "
Best ever .. funny romantic everything
"It's very romantic and interesting... You couldn't wait to read next chapter "
