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A Brilliant Blend of Innovation and Heart
"This story hooked me from the very first chapter. Joanna is a fantastic lead, and I love watching her intelligence and determination drive the story forward. The addition of Alain only made things better, their dialogue is witty, natural, and enjoyable to read. The mix of innovation, history, and character development has made for a very compelling start. I'm looking forward to reading more!"
Joanna Stole My Heart
"I'm still reading this story, but I already know it's something special. The writing is engaging, polished, and effortless to follow, making it easy to get lost in the world the author has created. Joanna is such a beautifully crafted character. She feels authentic, believable, and incredibly human. Her strength and courage shine through without ever feeling forced, which makes her someone you genuinely want to root for. And Alain... in my opinion, he's the perfect partner. Their relationship feels natural and heartfelt, adding even more depth to the story. I'm excited to keep reading and discover where their journey leads🖤"
A true Visionary
"I truly enjoyed this story. The main character Joanna, is a true visionary. She really was before her time.It is good to see a woman succeed during the time frame of the events.So much was built because of her guidance. The story is well written.Thank you for Sharing your talent!"
The Future
"Amazing sort of the Apple backstory- loved that it was told from Hoffmans perspective."
Excellent read
"Most people know about Steve Jobs, but I’d ever heard of her. This is a captivating story about a force just as compelling as Steve and how she shaped her space of the world. I’ve loved following her journey. The writing is excellent. The characters felt real. I left this story wondering why I’d never heard it before. But I’m so glad this was the author to deliver it. Highly recommend. "
Dear Pi Us, I’m really enjoying your story!
"The way Joanna Hoffman handles that warehouse full of brilliant, exhausted engineers sounds so tough and impressive! I can't wait to see how she shapes the future. Best of luck with your writing!"
Wonderful biopic!
"Never thought I’d come across something like this on a platform like this. Although it’s not a documentary, the writing immediately shows how responsibly the author approached telling the story of a major chapter in this remarkable woman’s life."
Beautifully Written
"This story is beautifully written. Between the prose, characters, and descriptions, I was captivated. Typically, I’m not one for historical fiction, but this book had me hooked. Joanna is a compelling character. With her witty comments and intelligence, I enjoyed reading about her. I liked how her relationship with Alain didnt compete with the main plot. Instead, it supported it wonderfully. It was refreshing to read about a female character dominating in a male dominated field. Overall, you did a fantastic job. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. "
Innovation and love
"A story that draws you in from the very first chapter. Joanna immediately intrigued me with her character, determination, and professionalism. What I loved most was how you portrayed the creative process—how difficult it is to invent something new, and how important timing can be for an innovation to succeed. I can only imagine how much research went into writing this story. Another thing I really enjoyed was how naturally you wove Joanna and Alain's romance into the main storyline. It never overshadowed the plot; instead, it complemented it beautifully. This is a story that blends professionalism, innovation, friendship, and love into one compelling journey. Definitely worth reading. 🤍 #ic10 "
Great writing!
"Your writing style is clean, engaging, and incredibly easy to follow. Joanna immediately stands out as a fascinating main character. She’s sharp, confident, and refreshingly different. I also love how you’ve brought the early days of Silicon Valley to life. The dialogue feels natural, the pacing is strong, and the mix of historical facts with compelling storytelling makes it feel like I’m watching these events rather than simply reading about them.😍 After only a couple of chapters, I’m already invested and genuinely curious to see where Joanna’s journey leads. This story seems both educational and deeply entertaining. Looking forward to reading more!"
Captivating read
"A very vivid 1980 plot of people trying to build something meaningful. Joanna, the main character, amazes us with her intelligence and her courage. And the romance story between her and Alain keeps me hooked. Clear and well written, fast paced — a lovely high-stakes drama."
Incredibly Engaging
"The story is incredibly engaging, immediately pulling you into Joanna’s world. The author’s skill in expressing her emotional journey, especially her heartbreaks, is truly impressive. Joanna’s journey from the warehouse to the table shows her incredible strength, and Alain’s unwavering support is something to admire throughout the story. It’s so well written that you’ll find yourself completely absorbed in the pages."
A Brilliant, Cinematic Start!
"The first two episodes are a fantastic introduction to Joanna and the early Mac team! The writing feels so sharp, & alive. I absolutely loved Joanna’s entrance, she doesn't try to dominate the room by force, but stands out through her sheer clarity, intelligence, and the courage to ask the questions everyone else is avoiding. Her dynamic with the men around her feels completely authentic, capturing a really great mix of tension, skepticism, and mutual respect. The dialogue is definitely a highlight for me; it’s crisp, purposeful, and does a wonderful job of moving the story forward naturally. The quiet emotional undercurrent between Joanna and Alain is also beautifully handled with a lot of maturity. Plus, the chaotic warehouse setting grounds everything perfectly against all those big, visionary ideas. If anything, a tiny bit more sensory detail could make it even more immersive, but overall, this is a strong, cinematic opening. I'm completely invested in these characters and the world they're building!"
An inspiring journey
"A beautifully written story about the journey of Joanna Hoffman. I fell in love with her character from the very first chapter. She is resilient, ambitious, strong-minded, and knows exactly what she wants. One of the brilliant minds who helped shape Silicon Valley, Joanna's story is both inspiring and deeply human. I truly enjoyed following her journey through its many ups and downs, her successes, her failures, and the relationships that shaped her into the remarkable woman she became. Some of the lines and reflections are so powerful that they stay with you long after you've finished a chapter. The story ends on a hopeful note, leaving the reader with a sense of optimism. All in all, this was a thoroughly enjoyable read."
Empowering♥️♥️♥️
"Her life story was told perfectly. No rush scene, nor forced telling. She didn't needed to be perfect just to change what they built. Her ways. Her principles were empowering— like the scene where she stand up for herself. And didn't flipped so just Steve could get what he wants. She knows her worth. And i loved her through that.♥️♥️ The style itself. It doesn't need to be sci-fi, Nor something grand. It just need human touch for Joanna's life to be told. "
A witty read filled with lots of surprises, even more heart, and tons of sass
"The Reality Distortion Field is a historical fiction based off Joanna Hoffman, an unknown woman who gave Steve Jobs a run for his money. In it, we experience through her eyes the challenges of being a woman in a man's world, as we journey with Joanna as she makes a name for herself. The book is excellently written, with witty dialogue that makes you laugh, makes you cheer, and sometimes makes you wonder what on earth Joanna is thinking. The plot keeps you guessing the whole time and the story moves along quickly. It was very enjoyable and fun to read and I really enjoyed Joanna's wit and personality. It makes me wish I had met her in real life, because I could definitely learn a thing or two from her about how to be self-confident. I liked her a lot, I liked getting to know her, and I enjoyed this book. #IC10"
Trial and Error
"Not going to lie to you, I didn't even know that the story was based off or real people (besides like 2 characters) lol but it was overall such a pleasant read. The story does a great job at showing how ambitions can help push through shortcomings and motivate you to create something new, especially when it comes to creating the future. The dialogue is very fluid and healthy, and the plot does a great job at giving you insight into the characters' personal lives and tribulations, both inside and outside the warehouse! Very fun read, and I'm so glad I spent my time reading it!"
Review
"The premise grabbed me right away: Joanna Hoffman stepping into this chaotic Silicon Valley warehouse in 1980, surrounded by brilliant but wiped-out dudes scrambling to make a computer actually function. It's got that early Apple energy without feeling like a straight Jobs worship fest. She’s the one woman who refuses to get sucked into the hype and actually pushes back, which makes her super relatable and badass. 21 chapters, completed story — nice and tight. The writing keeps things moving with solid pacing, some tense team drama, late-night hustle, and real human moments amid all the tech dreams. A few bits felt inspired by real history (Joanna was legit a key player back then), but it adds heart and stakes instead of dry facts. Not perfect — some dialogue got a tad cheesy in spots — but overall it sucked me in and I finished it faster than I expected"
Good discovery
"I didn't know Jonna Hoffman but I got engaged to her history.The love story with Alain feels so real. How she advanced over the problems is admirable"
A Unique Take on Technology
"In my opinion, this was a unique and unusual story. I think readers who are interested in technology and fans of Steve Jobs will find it especially interesting. The overall concept of the book felt quite rare and original to me."
