Inkitt
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Good story!

"I liked this book! The story describes the conflict and the combination of the Light and Darkness. If you love the fantasy genre, then you must read this. Here you can find also the poetry. You will get satisfied when reading this if you love poetry. I should tell you that it is amazing to read this book. You can read on and on and even not notice that you have reached the end or the middle. I loved this book The author did an amazing job while writing this. I loved the idea!"

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Wonderful!

"Though I don’t usually enjoy poetry books, I did enjoy what I read of this one. That being said, I’ll defintely finish this. Like every book, there was minor technical mistakes, but the poems themselves were wonderful."

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Interesting

"The fifth poem is very impressive, and it inspired me to add a few words: Time ages and decays, / if you don't fight well .... Time heals all, / but does it heal beyond the space-time continuum ? Writing reminds all, / monkey times Humans forget all, / monkey times"

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It has potential

"I think that your story is great I really do. but it doesn't give me feeling like every time I read something I feel. Your story needs to dig deeper I feel like if you went deeper with it than it would be a 5 out of 5 story. You have potential as a writer you just need to dig deeper. It is one of the most interesting things that I have ever read and I look forward to more of your work and growth as a writer."

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