Confused but great start
Okay, so I'm confused by the story and plot. Like the first two chapters are filters but they are confusing me. The problem might be because they are short and don't like to introduce the characters properly. Like is the mc male or female? What does the mc look like? How old is the mc? same goes for the villain. Also, there are some grammar mistakes in the story. But other than that the story is going in a good direction. What you really need to do is make the following chapters longer, introduce the characters a bit more, describe characters/settings, and fix the grammar/punctuation. I think that the story can get better with improvement/ practice.
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