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Awesome

"This is the first time I am reading something from BL genre and it is quite nice. The way Rin and Dang are portrayed sure gives a kdrama vibe to me and I love it. The characterisation is on point, the story and plot is compelling. There’s only one thing that can be fixed is the character introduction. According to my experience or as a reader, I tend to forget their intro since it is given at the beginning, try incorporating it within the chapters or when they make their first appearance. It would be great. But I read all the 6 chapters and I liked it. Keep writing!!"

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My First BL Read

"This is my first time reading a BL story, and I was pleasantly surprised by how engaging the first chapter was. The writing is smooth and easy to follow, and the interactions between the characters immediately caught my attention. The story has a light and enjoyable feel, and I'm already curious to see how the relationship between the two main characters develops. The opening does a good job of drawing readers in and making them want to continue. I've only read the first chapter so far, but it has definitely made me interested in reading more. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes. Keep writing!!!"

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