The First Oath by Tanyaradzwa Bamu at Inkitt
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THE FIRST OATH

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Summary

The First Oath Three hundred years before the legend begins, the realm of Aethelgard stands on the brink of ruin. Elara, a gifted but hidden Seer, emerges from the hills to warn Prince Kaelen of coming disaster. Proving her visions are true, she faces the court’s fear and doubt, while he must choose between old pride and new wisdom. Together, they forge a sacred bond: the Seer shall light the way, the Sovereign shall rule with strength — and their oath will shape the kingdom for centuries to come.

Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 Threads of what is to come

The air in the hills smelled of pine, rain, and old stone — and of something else, sharp and electric, like lightning held in the palm of a hand.

Elara knelt beside the standing stone, her fingers brushing the weathered grooves carved into its face. For three days and three nights, the visions had come without rest: fields turning brown under a sun that burned too bright, ships swallowed by waves that rose higher than castle walls, and kings falling one after another, their crowns rolling into dust.

Aethelgard will break, the vision whispered. Unless something changes.

Her clan called the Sight a burden, a gift best kept locked away. “We do not meddle in the affairs of crowns,” her grandmother had warned, again and again. “To show what you see is to become a target. Rulers fear what they cannot control.”

But Elara could not look away. In every vision, there was one constant: a young man with calloused hands and a scar across his left brow, walking the borderlands instead of sitting on a throne. He listened to farmers, shared bread with soldiers, and looked at his people not as subjects, but as family.

His name was Kaelen — Prince of Aethelgard, heir to a throne that was already beginning to crack.

That evening, when the sky turned purple and the stars pricked through the clouds, Elara made her choice. She wrapped herself in a plain wool cloak, tucked her small stone of focus into her belt, and slipped past the guards of her hidden valley. If she stayed, she would only watch the ruin unfold. If she went, she might be killed — but she might also give the realm a chance.

The journey took ten days. She traveled by back roads, avoiding royal patrols and suspicious villages, her Sight guiding her around landslides, bandits, and flooded streams. When she finally reached the edge of the royal forest, she found him exactly as she had seen him: sitting beside a campfire, his armor dented, a map spread across his knees.

He looked up as she stepped into the light, hand resting on the hilt of his sword.

“Who are you?” His voice was steady, not angry — only wary. “And how did you pass my scouts?”

Elara pulled back her hood, letting him see her eyes, the same eyes that held the weight of futures unwritten.

“I am Elara,” she said softly but clearly. “And I have come to tell you what will happen if you do not change your path. I have come to warn you — and perhaps, to help you save your kingdom.”

Kaelen stared at her, his expression unreadable. “Many claim to see the future. Most seek only gold or favor.”

“I seek neither,” she replied. “I see the harvest failing next moon. I see raiders crossing the northern passes before the first snow falls. I see civil war breaking out within a year — and your line ending on the battlefield.”

For a long moment, the only sound was the crackle of the fire. Then Kaelen leaned forward, his gaze sharp.

“And what do you see if I listen?”

Elara smiled faintly, a glimmer of hope in her voice.

“I see a bond,” she said. “One that will make your reign stronger than any before it. But it will require trust — more trust than any king has ever given a stranger.”

Somewhere in the trees, an owl called. The threads of fate, once tangled and dark, began to twist toward something new.

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