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Trouble from day one

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Summary

This is just a sneak peak tell me if I should keep going or just stay reading I won't be upset I promise lol thank you for your time all my love

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

prologue

From day one I knew there was something special about him, there was a pull I’ve never felt before all I wanted to do was grab him and jump his bones.

His shyness, was the cutest thing I have ever seen, the way he gave me those hazel blue eyes made my skin sizzle, he hasn’t even talked or touched me yet.

I don’t even know this sexy mans name, never seen him around here before but I feel connected to him already. I knew I’d have to force the conversation so I did the only thing I could think of and told my bestie to take my camera, we were going to spare because unfortunately for me I was the best female fighter and he was going to know it.

What I didn’t know was that he knew his shit and I ended up on my back, with him on top of me, holding my wrist above my head and if that didn’t just turn me the fuck on, I don’t know what would .

I knew I was in trouble for a few different reasons,

First ~I don’t lose, and I mean like its never happened. Secondly~I never get put on my back unless I want it to happen, and right now my body wanted him. My inner self was losing. Three~I couldn’t get my heartbeat to steady, my brain couldn't focus.

He could probably hear my heart racing like I was the horse winning the race.

I knew he could smell my arousal, it wasn't a question because when he locked his beautiful deep eyes, looking down at me, his eyes went black in two seconds flat and he took a deep breath like he was sucking my soul from me. I swear I saw a flicker of gold in his eyes before they went black.

I went still with my cheeks hot and flushed with embarrassment, wondering if it was just me?!?! Could he smell me, ohh gosh I’m going to die right here on the spot, no this can’t be happening. This kind of thing doesn’t happen to me!!!

Please somebody, just dig my hole nowww, I’ll gladly get in the hole my damn self !!! I just wanted to run away, which is something I don't do I run towards danger!!

Instead my body had other ideas, there it was a freaking moan, slipping through my lips.

I’m hoping it was low enough that only I could hear it. I bit my bottom lip and flipped him where he was now with his back in the dirt with me straddling him, shit I forgot I had this stupid dress on that my bestie Jamie made me wear to this stupid party, she just had to drag me too. PERFECT!!

Did I mention the dress she picked out hugs my body like a second skin, yeah sure it made me feel a little sexy, it has a slit on the right side where my ass could show if I wasn’t careful and right NOW I’m not being careful, as in now this dress is all bunched up on my hips with my big tits almost falling out showing all my glory. Of course the real cherry isn't just my virginity it's that tonight of all nights, I wasn’t wearing any panties, ahh fuck my life.

Before I could even think he grabbed me by my hips with his left hand sliding painfully slow up my thigh, touching my bare skin where the slit was and he pulled me down by grabbing me by the hair gently with a little rough pull getting his fingers caught tightly in my long dark hair and then he, he kissed me.

I don’t mean just a slow peck, it was a sexy kiss, I mean the deepest hottest kiss I’ve ever imagined in my life, I opened my mouth to let him in, and he gave me his tounge. At first it was nice and slow then he started devouring my mouth like he wanted to own me. I couldn’t hold back I moaned again but this time it was loud enough for him to hear, as my moan echoed in his mouth.

he pulled back with this sexy smirk and said I’m not that shy babygirl and you, you're going to be the death of me. He put his pointer finger to my swollen wet lips like he wasn't done talking to me just yet.

He whispers in my ear all hot, with that sexy husky voice of his, doing things between my legs again. He's pulling my heartstrings so tight, I realized I've been holding my breath. What is this man doing to me, I don't feel, I don't get excited, I'm cold ,hard, with no heart. I play it safe. Why do I feel like I've known him for years and why am I already missing his body heat.

He says, I don’t know your new name, but that's ok baby because you're mine now and you’ll never get away again. I'll be watching you, this isn't finished sweetheart. Then he whispers where I could barely hear, he says my dearest Elizabeth.

That's not my name though, he must have me confused with another girl, it shouldn't hurt but my heart aches wishing I was this Elizabeth, how lucky, this woman is, is all I thought...

Before I could respond, he moved so fast and then he was gone .. what the fuck, I blinked a couple of times.. Did I just freaking dream this, at a party full of people all around acting like nothing just happened?!?

What in the hell was in that drink?!?! I have to find Jamie, and get out of here, like NOWWW, speaking of ,where did she go she was just standing there taking pictures.

I’m embarrassing wet, I can feel it dripping down my thighs, All he did was kiss me, I've never in my life been this wet not even when I pleasure myself, shittt what is going on with me, FOCUSSS!!

Hold on did he say I'll never get away AGAIN, and my NEW name, what is he talking about. Do I know this man!??! I must be drunk or just imagined this whole thing, as everybody around is just drinking, talking like I wasn’t just in the dirt with the most sexy man in the world.. I'm going to kill her for ditching me, I need her more than ever right now, where in the hell is my bestfriend!!?!!


I edit this just a little bit, when I wrote this ,I did it in 20 mins so wasn't the best and still isn't but I'm happier with this outcome so hope you all like, I will try and start on the second page ,chapter one tonight!!

please be kind and supportive !! I will not have any bullying on my page and will delete you, I hate when people try to bring others down, so anyways thank you for your time once again and I hope you like this version better, thank you all so much. Means the world to me especially you're feedback it will help me become better so don't be shy to let me know any errors or even some ideas and ill try to add it in there somewhere and give you a shout out on the chapter you inspired me 💓XOXO,your Cassandra 😉

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author

love it! it’s got a strong MC, the hint of mystery and the promise of spice. I’d love to see where you take it. so happy you posted!❤️❤️❤️

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oh loving 💗 this. please 🙏 🙏🙏🙏 keep going, need to know what's happening!!!

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Very good start. I like the bit of mystery with his disappearance and the name thing.

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