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Obsessed need more 💜

"I devoured the three chapters that are up from the start I was hooked and I was in. Some Punctuation errors nothing bad does not matter for me and areas of my books struggle in that departure but the characters are amazing and story which you have is there. I need more chapters ASAP I need to know what happends next what are these Visions she is happening in connections to what is happening now. Unique take on this erotica love story nothing I have read has been done like this and I read a lot. Now down to business should you keep writing yes especially if Cryptic is now invested here I need more no rush but I'm game and I'm in. Thank you for sharing. 💜"

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Suspenseful

"I don’t usually read books like this, but honestly, I really like it! If you’re looking for something spicy with an interesting story, I definitely recommend giving this one a try. It keeps me on the edge of my seat, and I’m always curious to see what happens next. If you’re not old enough, please don’t read it—but when you are, it’s definitely worth checking out. 😂"

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Trouble from day one

"The story was good and interesting the writting was life like especially the S*X part that was intense "

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Loving This So Far

"I know the story isn’t finished yet, but I’m really loving the characters and the plot development so far. You’re doing so good with building everything up. I’ve stayed engaged through the few chapters you’ve written, and I can already see a lot of potential in the story. Keep going—I’m excited to see where it goes next! I love you girl. You doing so good💕"

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