Will You Be Mine?

"The book called "Will You Be Mine?" is an ongoing amazing read. The introduction is pretty good; it explains things about the book, like how it's the author's first book on InKitt. The story is brilliantly written in the first person. You can tell what type of book it is. The chapters are clearly labelled, which is great because there's no confusion. In the first chapter, the text is spaced out in a way that makes it easy to read and not get lost, giving a bit of backstory on the main character. The text flows perfectly; it all makes sense. Chapter two is much the same as the first, it's well written and you can really see the effort put into the book. The text is also properly written. The overall plot of the story is wonderfully written. In the book, you can really sense the emotions, which is quite important. In chapter three, you can see the main character's crush is one-sided at the moment, which might change as the story goes on, and it's pretty entertaining. In chapter four, it’s mentioned that the prince is strangely lonely, just as the main character sensed before, possibly showing the last of his feelings towards her. There may be a reason for his actions, like perhaps being taught or forced to behave that way. When the main character fell, the prince seemed a little fond of her, showing he found her clumsy or amusing because she kept getting into trouble unintentionally. The chapter still felt a bit one-sided, as she mentioned. In chapter five, the prince lingered longer than expected for some unknown reason. In the story, he seems quite fond of her and a bit observant too. Chapter six shows a little about how close they’ve become, even though they don’t talk much. Given how lonely he appears in the book, I think she might unknowingly be his best friend. In chapter seven, her distance from him is noticeable and might have bothered him. I think this could be a sign that he does like her. Overall, I reckon the book is really well written, the plot is amazing, everything lines up nicely, and the emotions are clearly felt. The series is really good, and I believe this book is going to be an amazing chapter book that should continue. My opinion? I’d definitely recommend anyone read it."