What is your opinion?
Those who watch
"It's thrilling and I like the short chapters. It's easier to read, sometimes it feels too short but that's okay."
I like It 😁
"This is my new story. I hope you all enjoy it! 😊"
Perfect bedtime tale for children you loathe-
"Despite the story clearly being intended adults, the author has adopted the classic children's book technique of rapid progression. In this case, both threat and measure of prose. Which I suppose amounts to what I would classically call a real page turner..."
Nice
"Hi Neon, your story is amazing. It's nice. Congratulations buddy🌹"
Review
"I found each part very interesting and wanting to learn and read more. But I honestly cant tell if these are supposed to be short stories or all one story. I would definitely recommend leaving a note or comment in the description that its a short story if they are and work on connecting the parts if not."
