Engaging

"I enjoyed the flow of the writing and the darkness that escalated as the story progressed. Works as a short story but could also be bulked out to make a longer novella with a few more peripheral characters. The ending occurs to you some time before it is revealed, but it really doesn't detract from the overall tone of it, which was modern with a touch of Lovecraft. Grammar and punctuation was excellent bar one error I spotted (taught rope should be taut rope). I'll definitely look forward to reading more."