What is your opinion?
Well Done!
"Some good writing and a hell of imagination! I loved the voice and style. Captivating, so far, and in many ways similar to my "We, Wanderers". I would appreciate your opinion on it when you get a chance to have a look. I hope to complete reading "Sins of the Father" through and get back with more comprehensive feedback on the overall plot and structure. Keep writing. Best wishes! 5 stars. Tom"
Attention grabbing work!
"After reading the first chapter there are a few things I noticed. It does drop you right into the action, which is something a lot of readers, including myself, enjoy seeing. I know that it did a good job at capturing my attention. Although, in my opinion as a reader of many fantasy novels, I feel like it hasn't given enough description. It feels slightly too fast paced and I found myself confused about where events were taking place. Aside from that I enjoyed reading this. The action is interesting and intense and we really get to see the writers hard work shining through."
