The Clouds as Seen from Ellsworth

"Very interesting post-apocalyptic world. What I enjoyed most about this story was being able to see both sides of the main-plot war through the eyes of different characters. Its interesting to see how both sides feel and respond to each other."

Both sides now . . .

"A desolate wasteland ravaged by death; wars and rumours of wars, so deftly handled by our author with a mind decisive on how humanity will progress once the big bomb, bombs, have reorganised the planet. No indication given as to when these weapons of destruction fell, but they changed the lifestyles and life expectancy of those who survived forever. These doomed souls appeared to have learned little from this ultimate experience for a massive proportion of them seem intent on continuing the carnage and killing on a one-to-one basis where others have inherited a miraculous programme of reincarnation, no matter how severe their injuries. In this well written fantasy I am forced to ask how the structure of national television was able to survive amid it all. All in all a great imaginative tale that should appeal strongly to those seeking escapism and the enjoyment of timeless and eternal degradation. Wishing you well, Chris with this one. Little to fault. (I find it interesting you have yet to comment on your reviews.)"

Plenty of Potential

"Minor gripe: I was told this was fantasy when it's Post-apocalyptic Sci-fi/Alt. History. With that out of the way, what did I think of this story? It's a bit rough around the edges, but the overall setting and lore pull you in. The writing style is a mite bit passive, but the different point of views, giving understanding from all sides, was a really nice touch. The characters were interesting, though I felt the overall world and everything else going on in it eclipsed them, which is not a bad thing. If you can create a world that feels just as alive as the focuses of the narrative, that is truly a marvel and worth a good bit of praise. Overall, I enjoyed it. The story has a good bit of promise in the coming drafts. I cannot wait to see what kind of changes and growths the author plans to do and go through, but, as-is, it's definitely worth a read-through."

Review

"Just finished reading what is available and all I can say is, it if great. I can't wait to see how it all ends. Reading the story in different points of view on both sides gives incredible insight on the character's personalities and views of the world around them Keep it up and when its all finished it'll be a great story that people will definitely enjoy."

Great Story

"I really enjoyed your story and am wondering how it will all turn out. It is wonderful to see the story from both sides and different points of view. I loved your characters and I enjoyed the constant action. Keep writing this is a really good book in the making."

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