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Everything You See cant be Unseen

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Summary

I know you've seen them Why didn't u say anything? Were you afraid? I needed u to noticed I needed u to tell me it's okay and comfort me But u didn't. Why? Itś Anas sophomore year at Eastwood high and she keeps a journal and writes so she wouldn't be tempted to fall back into her old habits. Follow Ana through her journey of second loves, heartbreaks, and friendships. I'm sure most of you can relate too.

Genre
Poetry,Romance
Author
Si.J
Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
9
Rating
4.3 (32 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Letting Go


(Present Time)

The day you let me go,

Was the day I floated on fall leaves

And waited as rain sogged up the branches,

Everything in slow motion,

Even the trees danced to this new rhythm

They felt bad for me,

So their roots plucked me off their leaves,

And let me free

The day you disappeared,

Was the day I saw comets in the sky,

I think it was you,

Trying to warn me that I was fading,

Little did you know,

I wanted to fade

And forget every melody in my head

So it didn't faze me,

Not even when the sun burnt my skin

And imprinted your name in my head

I was okay with blending into oblivion



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author

Ok

7 years
author

WOW you have a great talent in writing

7 years
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author

I can relate to this poem. But it really good.

6 years
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