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Ending?

"Wondering why it stopped. Are chapters added at diffetent times? I hoped to finish the story twice now. "

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Really liking this so far

"I like the plot, I like that the MFC isn't an idiot. The first real sex scene was great. Editing would get this to five stars. "

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Anatomy of obssession

".smut writing .BDSM Mature 18 .kinks"

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