Evangeline

"I was hoping this was a short story with an ending — they got married, had a wedding night, and he left for Louisiana. I do not know if your plans include dribbling out a few chapters, or completing the story in a year or two. I enjoy your writing style and humor, but I promise that my style is to listen to books (this I read) and I will not go hunting to read a conclusion in a year. Just a friendly head’s up that most readers move on, never starting, or worse for you, never come bank. Thanks for your time spent producing and publishing your tale. PS. I’m writing from New Orleans and I love it — with AC and dehumidifiers and 12 foot ceilings. I hope you figure out how to make his life enjoyable. "