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The famous (Dad had lore) bit always makes me smile
"Love the first three chapters, setting up the story well. Love how her father had some LORE!!! having that amount of money under his teaching job. The delicious mafia man comes out with a file instead of a gun! OMG he must be so smart! This will definitely be a guilty pleasure to whet the whistle. I believe that this book has serious potential. Also love how the heroine is trying to find shady stuff about her dad, like owing money is enough! May you please read my book: don't know if its your cup of tea though? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1806042 Tales of Misfits: Welcome to the Triangle Little Rabbit"
lily
"perfect"
