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SWEET SIN: A Mafia Romance

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Summary

In Vegas, they call me the "Sweet Sin." I built an empire out of sugar and flour to bury the ghosts of my past. I thought I was free. I thought my debt was paid. I was wrong. Twenty years ago, Luigi Cavalli didn't just save my life—il broke my soul. He was a demon in a suit, a predator who claimed me in a hotel room and never truly let go. Now, the King of the Cavalli family is back. He’s more dangerous, more possessive, and he’s decided that I still belong to him. But there’s a war brewing in the streets of Sin City, and a secret I’ve sworn to protect with my life. To save an innocent, I’ll have to dance with the devil one more time. In the desert, the sweetest flowers are the most poisonous. And Luigi is about to find out that sugar can be as sharp as broken glass.

Genre
Romance
Author
Aby Noah
Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

The Taste of Sin

Brown butter and caramelized sugar didn’t just linger in the air.

They claimed it.

The scent clung to the walls, thick and heavy, until every breath felt like a temptation.

In Vegas, they call me “Sweet Sin.”

My bakery,The Queen of Sugar, isn’t just a shop. It’s a sanctuary. A French-infused den of lust for anyone desperate for a fix.

Tourists come looking for a Parisian thrill. Palace concierges crawl to my door to satisfy the whims of their VIPs.

I should be satisfied. I should feel powerful.

But I never forget where I came from.

My gaze drifted to the frame on my desk. Under the glass sat a piece of yellowed paper: my old TWA flight ticket.

A relic. A reminder of who I really am.

It was the eighties. I was seventeen, with a mouth too loud and an innocence just waiting for a match.

Marc, my boyfriend back then, was a dreamer with empty pockets.

We’d saved every cent, working soul-crushing jobs to afford this trip before college.

I can still see us at the TWA agency on the Champs-Élysées. We gripped our passports like talismans. We were chasing the American Dream.

I’ll never forget the sear of the Los Angeles air. Or the chrome glint of that rental Buick.

The moment my hands gripped the steering wheel, a jolt of pure freedom surged through my veins.

We tore up the asphalt from L.A. to the desert. Everything was new.

Neon signs buzzing over motels. Volleyball on Long Beach. The damp heat of hot tubs where our bodies first surrendered to a desperate, frantic desire.

I was obsessed with the trucks.

Steel giants slicing through the wasteland. There was something raw and wild about this country.

It woke up the foster kid inside me. The girl who never had a home. The girl who knew that in the wild, you only survive if you become the predator.

Then came Vegas.

One night, I left Marc at his blackjack table to get some sleep.

At six in the morning, a violent hammering at the door shattered my dreams.

I stumbled to the door, eyes heavy, wearing nothing but an oversized T-shirt.

Two men in suits stood there.

The first was old, with eyes like ice that promised a shallow grave.

The second… the second was a demon carved from midnight.

He held Marc by the collar like a stray headed for the kill.

With a rough shove, the younger man tossed Marc into the room.

The door clicked shut behind them. Final. The air in the room turned to lead.

The man with the obsidian eyes locked onto me.

He stripped me naked with his gaze, slow and arrogant. A shiver raced down my spine—fear mixed with a sickening, traitorous heat.

“Listen, Frenchie,” he began.

His voice was dark velvet. Rough. Dangerous.

“Your boyfriend played a game he couldn’t afford. He lost money he doesn’t have. And in this town, we always collect.”

I didn’t flinch.

The streets had taught me one thing: never blink first when a wolf is at your throat.

I planted my hands on my hips, ignoring my lack of clothes.

“What are you proposing, Italian?” I asked, defiance burning on my lips.

A spark of surprise flickered in his eyes. Respect leaned into predatory hunger.

I turned to Marc. He was shaking like a leaf.

“You couldn’t stay still for one second, you idiot?” I snapped in French.

Suddenly, the old man’s walkie-talkie hissed.

“Damn it,” he grunted. “The pastry chef is in the ER. Accident. We’ve got the Texan’s order due tomorrow morning.”

My heart skipped a beat. There it was. My exit.

I pulled my shoulders back, my French accent cracking like a whip.

“I’m a pastry chef. Let him go, and I’ll fix your problem.”

They looked me over, skeptical.

But in Vegas, desperation is the best matchmaker.

I never took that return flight.

Marc went back to Paris alone, tail between his legs.

I paid his debt with my sweat, my talent, and sleepless nights in front of scorching ovens.

I swallowed the insults, the stifling heat, and the pressure of men who thought they owned me.

Today, I am the Queen of Sugar. And that plane ticket is my visa of freedom.

The office door slammed open with the violence of a storm.

I froze.

Luigi Cavalli stood in the frame. L.C.

Twenty years had passed, but his gaze still had the power to turn my resolve to ash.

He was broader now. More dangerous. He exhaled a heavy aura of mafia power that terrified me as much as it pulled me in.

“What’s this nonsense about going to the Cavalli gala with Sacha?” he growled, skipping the greeting.

His scent—amber and expensive tobacco—invaded my space.

My blood began to simmer.

I kept sketching cake designs on my notepad, refusing to show him how much his presence ached.

“Hello to you too, Luigi,” I whispered, eyes down.

He stepped forward, slamming his massive palms onto my desk. He caged me between his arms.

I finally looked up to challenge him.

The power game was starting again. He thought I still belonged to him.

He was right. But he needed to learn that sugar can be as sharp as broken glass.

“You aren’t going anywhere with him, piccola ,” he hissed, possessive and low. “You’re mine. Did you forget?”

I smiled. It wasn’t a sweet one.

“We’ll see, Luigi.”

A knock at the door broke the tension.

His fingers clamped around my wrist like a handcuff of silk and steel.

His skin was scorching against mine—a violent contrast to the shop’s air conditioning.

“Impossible?” he repeated, his voice dropping an octave. “Is that a word you learned in America? Because the girl I met twenty years ago didn’t know the meaning of it. She was ready to do anything to survive.”

Even damn herself.

I held his gaze, refusing to break.

“That girl died of exhaustion in your kitchens, Luigi. The woman standing here built this empire alone.”

“I owe you nothing. Marc’s debt was paid a lifetime ago.”

He leaned closer. His breath brushed my ear, sending a frantic shiver down my neck.

“You never finish paying a debt to a Cavalli. Sacha is a snake. He’s using you to get to me. If you go to that gala with him...”

I rolled my eyes and jerked my arm free.

My heart was hammering against my ribs. I turned to Paul, who stood in the doorway, paralyzed by Luigi’s shadow.

“Paul, I’m coming,” I said, my voice cold and final.

I brushed past Luigi. He caught my arm again.

“We aren’t finished.”

“Stop the game, Luigi. You know you and I… we’re impossible.”

I marched out of the office, my heels clicking on the marble with military precision. Luigi followed, a predator tracking his prey.

The kitchen was pure chaos. Steam fogged the windows of the walk-in fridge.

“The compressor blew, Madame,” Paul stammered.

“If we don’t drop the temp in an hour, the three hundred desserts for the Waldorf wedding are trash. And the sugar sculptures for the gala…”

I stared at the disaster.

Thousands of dollars. Hundreds of hours. My reputation.

I pressed my hands onto the stainless-steel counter. The cold metal grounded me.

“Paul, call the emergency tech. Tell him if he isn’t here in ten minutes, I’m buying his company just to fire him. Everyone else, move the fragile pieces to the chocolate cellar. Move!”

The team blurred into motion. Then, I felt that massive weight behind me.

Luigi hadn’t left. He leaned against a pillar, watching the panic with dark amusement.

“Need a hand, little queen? One phone call. I can have a tech here in three minutes.”

“I don’t need your methods, Luigi.”

“My methods work,” he retorted, stepping into the harsh kitchen light. “And they cost nothing… except a little loyalty.”

He stopped inches from me, ignoring the staff rushing around us.

He dipped a finger into a bowl of dark chocolate ganache on the counter.

His eyes locked onto mine as he brought it to his lips, sucking the sweetness off with agonizing friction.

“Always a taste of sin,” he murmured. “Sacha will never give you what I can. He loves your prestige. I love your scars.”

Paul’s walkie-talkie screeched:“Madame, the tech is unreachable. His truck broke down on the Strip.”

Silence crashed down on the kitchen.

My tiered cakes were starting to sweat. The sugar—that fragile, temperamental medium—was starting to weep.

I knew that if I asked Luigi for help now, I was unlocking the door to my life. I was giving him back the power he’d held over me for years.

I glanced at the framed TWA ticket visible through my office window. I came here to be free.

“Luigi…” I started, my throat tight.

He pulled a custom-made phone from his jacket, a predatory smirk tugging at his lips.

“Say it, piccola. Say it, and your fridge is fixed before your sugar melts. Tell me you’re canceling on Sacha.”

I stepped toward him, so close I could feel the raw heat radiating from his chest.

I placed my hand over his—the one holding the phone.

“Fix the fridge, Luigi,” I whispered.

“And in exchange… I’ll let you escort me to my car tonight. But I am going to that gala. And I will dance with whoever I damn well please.”

His eyes darkened. A flash of fury—or maybe a challenge—ignited in them.

“You’re playing with fire, my Queen.”

“I’ve spent twenty years in front of ovens, Luigi. The heat doesn’t scare me anymore.”

He tapped a quick message.

Two minutes later, three men in blue coveralls—but with the posture of soldiers—marched through the service entrance.

Luigi leaned down, his voice a dangerous crawl against my skin.

“It’s being fixed. But don’t think for a second we’re done. Tonight, at that party, you’ll remember exactly why I was the one who kept you in Vegas that night. Not Marc.”

He turned to leave but stopped at the threshold. He tossed a look over his shoulder.

“And wear the red dress. The one I had delivered this morning. Sacha hates red. It reminds him he’ll never have the blood in his veins to keep you.”

He vanished, leaving me in a cloud of sugar and spice.

My heart hammered like that eighteen-year-old girl’s again. The girl who realized for the first time that in the desert, the sweetest flowers are always the most poisonous.


Author’s Note

Thank you so much for reading the first chapter of SWEET I!

I wanted to dive straight into the heat and the history between Luigi and our “Sweet Sin.” I’m aiming for a fast-paced, high-tension ride—did the action feel punchy enough for you?

I’d love to hear your thoughts in the comments! Does the chemistry between them feel as electric as I think it does? Drop a comment and let me know if you’re ready for the Gala!

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Inkitt has a author's note section so you don't have to include the note in the actual chapter.

a day
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I've read through chapter 1 and while I can sense that this story has layers and thickness. I think maybe too much was packed into chapter 1. If I were to edit this chapter (these are just my suggestions btw) I would keep the back story, keep the suspense over L.C. Have her reflect on the past, paul comes inim about the fridge and Luigi doesn't enter until the very last paragraph of the chapter.

a day
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I also feel sometimes our queen of sugar is a little repetitive... maybe it's because a lot of the lines came from the blurb. I don't know... I feel like it could be a captivating story because it hooked me at the very beginning, but giving too much in the first chapter may not work in the favor of the story.

a day