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A great start for sci-fic newbie

"I've only just started this story and I'm already hooked. The pacing is smooth, the characters feel real from the beginning itself, and the detailing is so deep and thoughtful. I'm new to sci-fi and this was a great start for me. Really enjoying it so far!"

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JMO

"A lot of suspense however also a lot of tech which I don't understand fully. Will update after reading more. Would tell my my friends to read once finished."

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Dear AnnMariamN, I’m really enjoying your story!

"Hi AnnMariamN! Maeve's action scenes are truly thrilling and captivating. Keep up the amazing work! "

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Very immersive

"Really strong details and depth and I can tell just by reading how passionate and creative you are about this and it just makes it even more exciting to read!"

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The plot

"Amazing 👏 "

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