Athena's Book Of Poems Vol. 1 by Athena/Quinn X3 at Inkitt
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Athena's Book of Poems - Vol. 1

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Summary

These are all relatively short poems that I made in a span of about four months. A lot went on in my life in those mere four months and a lot of that is reflected in these poems.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The Orange that Is

An Orange.

A bright, speckled Orange.

The Orange that speaks, the Orange that hears, the Orange that feels.

It’s an Orange that Is.


The scent wafts through the air like fresh flowers in a sunny summer season.

You peel, peel, peel, until finally, you’ve reached the softness inside.

That first bite of that ripe Orange,

hits your taste buds, somehow both light

and stiff.


The juice explodes like the fireworks on the fourth of July.

That Orange, you so loved,

feels.


It feels the unwrapping of its rind,

the chomp of your teeth,

the delight you get from killing

a poor, innocent soul.


It’s gone now.

You don’t know,

but it’s gone now.

That sweet, delicate Orange, of that you just devoured,

it won’t ever be the same again…

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