Death Has No Name by MakaylaB at Inkitt
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Death Has No Name

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Summary

Deputy Warren has always seen things others cannot. For most of his life, he’s learned to ignore the moments when reality breaks—shadows that move wrong, silence that feels too heavy, and fleeting visions that never make sense. But when a routine elevator accident kills a young man in Flower Rose Apartments, something changes. This time, Warren sees something the others don’t. Markings burned into the body. Footsteps in empty hallways. And a presence that should not exist. As more deaths begin to surface, Warren realizes this is not a series of random accidents. Something is selecting the dead. And it has already started correcting those who escaped their fate years ago. Because in this city… death is not random. It is delayed. And it is finally collecting what it was owed.

Genre
Thriller
Author
MakaylaB
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1


Every name is a debt eventually. Some take fifteen years to come due. Some take a hundred and fifty. Nobody ever knows which kind theirs is until the night it finally comes to collect.

It was midnight when the alarm buzzed, and a hand slammed down on it before the second ring.

Danny Pruitt dragged himself upright, rubbing his face with both palms until the room stopped swaying. Twenty-nine years old, and forty minutes until his shift started at Joey’s Shop.

He sat on the edge of the bed a moment, elbows on his knees, staring at the carpet. Midnight shifts. He’d taken the job three months ago when his last one fell through — strange hours, steady pay, a manager who never bothered him much. His coworkers had warned him before he started. You’ll hear things,one of them had said, laughing in a way that didn’t quite sound like a joke. Just don’t think too hard about it.

Danny had laughed too, and forgotten about it — until the first night he worked alone and heard something moving in the back stockroom that turned out to be nothing. Pipes. Old building. He was good at writing things off.

The apartment held the particular quiet of midnight, the kind that belonged only to people who kept strange hours — the hum of the refrigerator, a distant siren somewhere in the city, the ordinary sounds of a place that kept existing whether he was part of it or not.

He stood, stretched until his spine cracked, and moved through the routine that kept him grounded. Everything had to be in order before he left — a habit left over from a childhood that hadn’t allowed for much disorder. He made the bed carefully, corners squared, pillow centered. Clean space mattered to him more than sleep did. If he could keep this small square of the world perfect, maybe the rest of it would follow some kind of logic too.

The apartment was small — four hundred a month small — with a single window over the kitchen sink looking down into an alley where trash cans stood guard over nothing. A secondhand bookshelf held mostly fantasy and science fiction, books that let you disappear into worlds that made more sense than this one, along with the odds and ends that accumulate in a young man’s first real place: a bobblehead from a game he barely remembered attending, a charger for a device he no longer owned, a framed photo of him and his sister from two summers back, both squinting into the sun, his arm around her shoulders. He paused at it the way he always did on his way to the bathroom. She’d wanted pizza that day; they’d ended up at the park instead because the weather was too good to waste indoors. She’d made him play frisbee even though he was terrible at it — thrown it into the lake twice, and she’d laughed until she couldn’t breathe.

He should call her tomorrow. Their Sunday calls had slipped to every other Sunday, then less, the way habits thin out when life gets busy. Out of his two other sisters, she was the one who’d always understood him best, the one he actually missed instead of just remembered to check in on, and he didn’t quite know how to explain his life to her anymore — the shifts, the quiet, the way he’d gotten good at existing without really living. She’d left for college two states over, chasing a future that made sense to everyone but felt too far away to Danny most days. He’d stayed exactly where they’d both grown up, born and raised in Kingston his whole life, working nights now at a bookstore most of the town didn’t even know still existed.

In the bathroom he brushed his teeth, watching himself in the mirror. His blonde hair stuck up in messy strands from sleep; he wet his hand and pushed it flat, which helped marginally. He’d stopped worrying about looking presentable a long time ago — nobody he met at 3 a.m. was taking notes. He looked at himself a moment longer than he needed to. Something about his own face had gone unfamiliar lately, like he was looking at someone he used to know instead of someone he was. He couldn’t say when that had started.

He changed into the red uniform, pulled on the worn cap with the old coffee stain he’d never bothered cleaning. Evidence that he existed, he liked to think. That he moved through the world and left some small mark on it, even if the mark was just a stain on a cap.

His phone read 11:42. Enough time, if he moved now. Keys off the hook by the door, wallet, a habitual pat at his pocket for the badge that was always already there.

He took one last look before stepping out — bed made, lights mostly off, the photo of him and his sister still watching from the shelf. Then the hallway: long, beige, lined in carpet that had probably been a deeper red once, fluorescent lights humming faintly overhead, the low murmur of someone’s television the only sign anyone else in the building was awake.

Halfway to the elevator, his phone buzzed. A text from his sister, 11:40.

you working tonight?

yeah midnight shift. talk tomorrow, he typed back.

Three dots, then: ok be safe 🙄

He smiled despite himself. She always added the eye-roll, like she was disappointed in his choices but resigned to them anyway. She’d asked him three times to quit this job and move on to something better. He didn’t fully understand himself why he stayed, working nights at a place most people in Kingston had never even heard of — something about the routine, the predictability, the way the night shift seemed to run on different rules than the rest of the world.

I will. Love you, he sent.

love you too weirdo.

He pocketed the phone and kept walking, already picturing tomorrow’s call — her classes, him pretending his life made more sense than it did, then hanging up to come back to this apartment, this routine, this job that paid enough to keep him fed and not enough to feel like it was building toward anything.

He pressed the elevator button. A ding echoed down the hall, and the doors slid open onto the small metal box that would carry him twelve floors down.

Footsteps sounded behind him just as he stepped forward — quick, light, moving fast along the carpet.

He turned. The hallway was empty. Every door closed. Nothing but the murmuring television and the hum of the lights and the thick quiet of a building full of sleeping people.

He stood listening a moment. Nothing moved.

“...weird,” he muttered, and stepped inside.

The doors closed behind him. He slipped in an AirPod, pulled up a song, and let the opening guitar fill his ear, bobbing faintly as the elevator began its descent, watching the numbers count down.

5. 6. 7.

This was his favorite part of the day — the space between leaving and arriving, where he didn’t have to be anyone or anything except someone moving through space, listening to something that made him feel a little less alone.

2.

The lights flickered. He glanced up. The bulb stuttered — once, twice, then a third time, longer than the others — and the floor numbers went dark along with everything else.

Then the bulb shattered.

Darkness swallowed the elevator whole, not the soft darkness of a room with the lights off but the absolute black of a space sealed in metal with no light source anywhere. He yanked the AirPod out. The music cut. In the sudden silence the only sound was the groan of the cables above him, low and metallic, a sound he felt as much as heard — a sound that meant something was very wrong.

He found the flashlight on his phone. The beam swept scratched metal walls, the panel of buttons, a handrail he grabbed instinctively. His thumb found the emergency button and pressed it.

Nothing.

He pressed it again. Held it. Counted to five.

The cables groaned louder.

Then the elevator dropped — no warning, no gradual pull, just the sudden weightless lurch of freefall, his phone flying from his hand, the walls screaming around him as the elevator car plummeted down the shaft like a stone through water.

His body understood before his mind caught up. This was it. This was the end of the routine, the clean apartment, the ordered life, the sister who wanted him to come home.

Impact came like a violent snap.

Then nothing.

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