The One Not Chosen
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The One Not Chosen

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Story Notes

A romantic comedy with fangs, ancient prophecies, questionable choices, one imaginary man named Brock, and a heroine who has never once seen a bad idea she couldn’t make significantly worse.

Summary

My best friend got kidnapped by the Wolf King. Everyone else keeps calling them fated mates. I keep calling it a felony. Unfortunately, no one believes me. Apparently, “seven-foot supernatural monarch climbs through second-story apartment window and steals your roommate” isn’t enough evidence these days. What’s even more concerning? Ashlyn insists she’s in love with him. According to her, being kidnapped was a “misundersting.” According to me, she’s suffering from Stockholm syndrome. Ashlyn drags me straight into wolf territory and with absolutely no plan whatsoever, I am determined to rescue her from the world’s most attractive bad decision The Wolf King is… less than thrilled. Instead of letting me ruin his happily ever after, he assigns his infuriatingly handsome right-hand man to babysit me until the mating ceremony is over. Now I’m trapped in a castle full of six-foot-something wolves who think growling counts as communication, kidnapping is a love language, and personal space is apparently a human invention. To make matters worse… My babysitter is sarcastic, overprotective, annoyingly competent, and keeps looking at me like I’m the one causing problems. (I am. But that’s not the point.) The longer I stay, the more impossible it becomes to ignore two very inconvenient truths… My babysitter is, in fact…kind of hot, and maybe Ashlyn and the Wolf King are (gag) in love.

Status
2h ago
Chapters
77
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue (Verona)

The first sign something is wrong isn’t an ear piercing scream.

It’s the silence.

Ashlyn isn’t quiet.

She talks in her sleep. She hums while she cooks, and narrates reality TV like the contestants can somehow hear her. Even when she’s asleep, she’s incapable of shutting up for more than ten minutes at a time.

So when the apartment falls still—I wake.

My eyes crack open. The blue glow of my alarm clock stains the ceiling.

2:17 a.m.

I lie there and listen only to hear…nothing.

Then—a floorboard groans, but it’s not the usual settling of old wood.

It’s someone taking a step.

My heart thuds once, hard.

“Ashlyn?”

There’s no answer. I throw off my blanket and shuffle into the hallway, still half asleep.

“You better not be eating my leftover cheesecake.”

Silence answers me. The living room comes into view. Moonlight spills through the windows, and washes everything in silver.

The couch is empty.

Ashlyn’s blanket lies crumpled on the floor.

“Ash?”

The soft scrape of leather against hardwood grates against the otherwise silent room.

I look up. Someone is standing in my living room.

No.

Not someone.

Something.

He’s too tall, nearly brushing the ceiling. His broad shoulders fill a long black coat that looks like it belongs in another century. Moonlight catches dark hair that’s falling across his face.

Then he lifts his head.

Gold.

His eyes are gold. Not hazel. Not amber.

Gold.

They burn like molten metal in the dark. My brain offers the only reasonable explanation.

Colored contacts.

It’s a weird choice for a home invasion, but okay.

Then his upper lip curls. Two elongated canines catch the light.

Then I see Ashlyn hanging over his shoulder like a sack of laundry.

Unconscious.

“Ashlyn!” I lunge forward and grab the nearest thing I can find, a standing lamp, and swing it at him.

It connects with his back with a dull clang. Nothing happens. He doesn’t even stumble.

Instead he slowly turns his head toward me, mildly irritated, like I’ve interrupted him during a very boring meeting.

I hit him again, but this time even harder.

Still nothing happens.

“Okay, rude,” I hiss.

He adjusts Ashlyn slightly on his shoulder like she weighs nothing. “You are loud.”

“That’s my roommate!”

“I am taking my mate.”

I blink.

“…Your what?”

He exhales through his nose like I’m the problem here. “Mate.”

“That is not, what does that even mean? Is this like… a cosplay club thing? Are you in a cosplay club? Is Comic-Con in town? Did a Renaissance festival get violently out of hand? Is this method acting?”

He stares at me. “…You are confusing.”

“Yeah, well, you’re kidnapping my friend!”

I swing the lamp again, but he catches it this time, with one hand, and barely looking at it.

The metal bends slightly in his grip.

I stop breathing.

He looks at the lamp. Then at me. Then sighs, deeply, like I am the most exhausting creature he has ever encountered.

“I do not have time for this.”

“Wow. Same.”

He shifts Ashlyn again.

“Put her down,” I demand.

“No.”

“That’s not a negotiation!”

He tilts his head. “I am a King. I do not negotiate with humans.”

“Well, what if I said she still owes me forty-three dollars and a Tupperware container? So you can’t take her.”

His eyes narrow slightly, like he’s trying to decide whether I’m amusing or annoying.

“Move,” he says.

“No.”

A beat passes. Then he looks past me, toward the window. I follow his gaze just in time to see the glass ripple. Like it’s not solid.

“…No,” I whisper.

He steps toward it.

I scramble in front of him. “You are not, nope, absolutely not, this is a second-floor apartment!”

He looks at me like I’ve said something deeply irrelevant.

“I am taking my mate.”

“I don’t care if she’s your tax accountant. Put her down.”

He doesn’t respond. He just walks straight through the window. He didn’t break it or open it like a normal person. No, he just, walked right through it.

I freeze.

“Okay,” I whisper. “I’ve never seen anything like that before.”

I rush to the window, throwing it open. “HEY! YOU CAN’T JUST—YOU CAN’T JUST TAKE PEOPLE!”

I blink at the empty street below. He’s gone. Ashlyn’s gone, and somehow I’m left standing in the middle of my living room, gripping a bent lamp and wondering how my Tuesday managed to turn into the opening scene of a fantasy novel.

Let Sabrinanoelle93 know what you thought about this chapter!

Marisol Rodriguez
Marisol Rodriguez

I meant beginning

2 months
1
N. G. Luton
N. G. Luton

Verona’s voice is instantly engaging. Her attempts to explain away the gold eyes and fangs, followed by the lamp, the unpaid forty-three dollars, and the ‘tax accountant’ line make the kidnapping scene genuinely funny without removing the danger. The clash between ordinary roommate logic and supernatural royal certainty works especially well.

a month
1
za'za
za'za

Jesus christ, summary ..

9 days

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