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Summary

Sticking to a hobby is difficult. For me, atleast. Putting yourself out there is difficult. For me, atleast. Doing anything is difficult. For me, atleast. But, that is the way it is... For me, atleast. A solution for me was to submit my writing to (free) contests. After six months of submitting to the contests I will post them in this collection. If I hear back with critism, I will post it with a poem on their critique. Why? Why not. -Here goes everything... To me, atleast.

Genre
Poetry
Author
ajcarbide
Status
2mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Apple Valley Review


Apple Valley Review,

Thank you for allowing me to submit selected works of poetry to your organization. I am a woman in my thirties that: tries to play jazz piano, is a certified machinist, stops to smell the flowers, and dreams of one day being able to work full time as a creative.

I write under a pseudonym since I work in an 'at-will' state and as much as I wish money didn't rule the world, it surely has a stronghold on mine. My apologies but I will not be providing my real name or mailing address. Hopefully, I will still be considered for entry.

The three poems I have included are original, not A.I., unpublished/unsubmitted elsewhere poems.

Thank you again for this opportunity,

AJ Carbide

First Poem Entry:

A Friend

I prayed for a friend

When I didn't have a god to pray to pray to anymore

But

Something hear my pleas

And sent me one

Now

I pray

That i can be a friend to them

Second Poem Entry:

Prayer Distance

I used to pray/ incessantly/ wondering how it worked/ how far away was the intended reciever ? / now- I don't even bother/// I check my phone/And send a message to my friend/ on the other side of the country/ they respond within the minute

Third Poem Entry

Only Two

The contest said

Up to six...

Six poems.

And so I cling to that number

Six

I might as well let this challenge fade

Like all the others

...

..

.

But

Now I have three

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author

I think it's a good thing that you'll share your experience with us through your poetry and writing.you can do it. so, Don't lose hope and continue your struggles. Best wishes for your upcoming contests.

2 months
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