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Emma

"I like that you don't go in just one direction for the characters."

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Great read

"I loved how the story wasn't predictable and every chapter had you wanting to read more."

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Worth it

"It is a really nice story. I enjoyed reading and the story plot was really good.Your writing skills are in needed good🎀💖 "

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Great

"I enjoyed reading your book very much. You have a writing style the keeps me interested from beginning to end! Thank you ❤️"

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From Betrayal to Power

"There were a great many plot twists to this story, which kept it interesting even though many of them were very heartwrenching. However, there were several editing misses that continued to interrupt the story. A few are listed below. Several chapters ended in sentences that were unfinished, leaving the reader hanging with thought incomplete. When Sarah’s father and brother reunite with her, their names are written as Zayden (father) and Adrien (brother). Later, at the wedding of Rhydian and Morienne, Rhydian’s best friends are listed as Zayden and Adrien. Seemed like a miss to me. But I do love a love story 😉and even with the errors, I did enjoy this."

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