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Death of a Guardian (First Draft)

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Summary

In the first book of my new world, we enter The Amber Kingdom, where there is a mad King who created the Kingdom Decency Laws that outlaw all LGBTQ persons. The people are labeled as Indecents and cast away from society to either Kara Wyspa (Punishment Island), or to the border with Iseron to fight day and night against the Kingdoms enemies. Emryk and Aleks are two boys in love. Accepted by their parents, they nonetheless must hide their true selves from the other people of Fortarre. While many agree the laws are wrong, no one is willing to risk the harsh punishments of defending others. The world is also filled with magical beings, God's, and Goddesses. Can the boys with the help of the God's and their children fight to end the laws? Can they succeed in finding and bringing the Aerimoaerian Elves back to the world and restoring the balance of Love back to the Kingdom. As the story unfolds, Emryk and Aleks discover shocking revelations that will forever change their lives. The first book of this new world explores themes of love, sacrifice, and the resilience of the human spirit in the face of oppression. *Temporary cover created from Dall-E*

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Complete
Chapters
45
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

Pantheon

(Terrianis, Oceanis, and Aerianis, temporary art made by midjourney.)

I didn't have these maps for this first novel. But it was added for the later drafts, and there are two changes for this novel. The first draft has both Wonder and Cognitius as the children of Vitalis and Mortius. In the new drafts, they are both the children of the Aspiri, the Mind Gods. I apologize if it is confusing for this novel, but I wanted to add it to help if you wanted to visualize the pantheon.

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