What is your opinion?
Serpent!
"Wow! The story is verrrrrrrrrrrrrryyy interesting! I did not think that it would be this great from the beginning until the end.... Frankly speaking, the title did not allure me... I just decided to read something new, like a horror story. And that was a right decision. I loved this. Here you can find so many interesting and new ideas. I was reading it everywhere. I could not leave it. Th characters are so new to me and sooooo much interesting."
A Serpent in Eden
"I really enjoyed the story, I love the British setting! You could write an additional book about Jim Ferrett!"
Cool
"I quite enjoyed this book. The idea of evil sometimes reminded of the philosopher Nietzsche, who said that people sometimes acted like beasts with strangers because they were freed of social pressure. So this was different, but also had similarities to that in some ways. However, I think a few things could benefit from editing. For example, you need to review your use of commas. Also, it might be useful to talk a bit more - just a bit more - about the characters. Perhaps show their backgrounds, a particular quirk or their physical details. I suggest this because although I could distinguish Jim Ferret, his wife, and Jim Jenkins as well as Ride, I had difficulty for the most part distinguishing Moose, Clay etc. Sudgen and his partner were a bit easier, but they also need a little more detail. Furthermore, the dialogue was often unrealistic, in the way that it seemed you were trying to show too much information through it. Showing information with dialogue is good, but only to a certain extent. Dialogue is usually relatively mundane, so it might be good to review the dialogue, or if you don't see what should be changed, get someone to act it out or perhaps give yourself some time to listen to the conversations around you (preferably with their permission.) otherwise, you had a refreshing style, an interesting topic, and a good end. Nice!"
