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Business Class Chapter 1

"A fast-paced story with realistic jargon. It made me think the write really did hid research or that he really knew the topic he was writing about. Chapter ended with a good cliffhanger."

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Lovely storytelling 💜

"Quick witted, fast paced, humorous. Totally enjoyed it. Not doing any spoilers so thank you for a feast of wordsmithing excellence 🥰😊💜"

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Gripping!

" A high-octane sci-fi thrill ride where a disgraced security chief chases a stolen prototype through a tech world that never saw him coming. Also the author has a good writing skills and style. "

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Business Class

"We are introduced to a relic. A security agent who has seen better days or...is he what he seems. A high-tech theft of a newly designed system is up for grabs. Because of the successful theft by inside sources, Devin Blassingame, our inventive, resourceful 'relic'... is supposedly out of a cushy, well-paying gig. Mr. Blassingame is unhappy with this turn of events, determined to clear his good name, retrieve the stolen goods and the high-ranking employee who took them. What ensues is a rowdy, high tech chase across continents that would rival any of the better James Bond movies with added flare and humor instilled by an outdated AI system called: Seven. Seven proves to be the icing on the proverbial cake. Its presence saves many a day and Blassingame's butt more times than the reader can tally. Tom Cruise has nothing on the 'relics' abilities to even the playing field of the games high-tech people play. I loved Blassingame from first introduction, and he only got better with time and distances traveled. This story moves at a clipped pace, setting the framework for a very cool futuristic caper that will hold your interest, amuse and puzzle...and delight. I highly recommend this read and the author. "

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action

"the plot is really good with enough amount of action and little romance. i am still reading it and hope to complete it soon. i highly recommend it if you like action."

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After being fired, Devin sets out to figure out how to improve things for himself...

"Devin is not happy about having been fired, and he travels to Goolsby, and Goolsby is desperate to survive the interrogation that Devin engages in as Devin seeks answers in regards to events related to him having been fired. This is an excellent story that has intriguing characters and lots of twists and turns in the plot, and I’m curious to find out what will happen with Devin’s goals that he’s intent on accomplishing. I’ve read a little over 7 chapters of this story so far, and I’m looking forward to reading the remaining chapters, and I highly recommend this story to anyone who’s looking for a good story to read!"

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