Prologue- The Doctrine
Seventeen Years Before the Sanctum Trials
The city had never been so quiet. Not because the streets were empty—they were packed marble-to-marble—but because every soul had stopped talking at once, listening with the desperate, terrified stillness of people who had forgotten how to hope. Behind the crowd, giant cranes towered over half-finished walls of white stone, a nation visibly deciding what it wanted to become.
Three years prior, war had swallowed everything worth saving. Neighbors had killed neighbors over food, over blame, over nothing. Everyone present had lived through a piece of it, and everyone had come for the same reason: to be told it would never happen again
A figure stepped onto the balcony above. Barely past twenty, with no crown or medals pinned to his plain dark suit, he looked more like a teacher than a ruler. When he spoke, his calm, unhurried voice carried to the back of the square.
“Three years ago, our nation stood on the edge of extinction. We buried our parents, our children, our futures. We blamed the war, hunger, each other—and we were wrong. Civilizations collapse when they forget discipline, when humanity refuses to master itself. Humanity carries seven flaws from which every tragedy in history is born.”
An enormous curtain fell away from the palace facade, revealing a map carved into seven gold-outlined regions. Banners unfurled from the parapets displaying a crown, a coin, a flame, a serpent, scales, an hourglass, and a chalice.
“The Doctrine of Separation begins today,” he announced. “Each Region will bear one flaw: Pride, Greed, Wrath, Envy, Sloth, Gluttony, Lust. We divide because healing starts with understanding. Every child will grow up surrounded by those who understand the specific flaw they must overcome. One day: seven perfected foundations, and from them, humanity made whole.”
The square erupted into weeping, cheering, and desperate relief. High above, Nicholas Lowbottom watched patiently before lifting a single hand. The square fell instantly silent.
“The future belongs to those who will build it. The greatest among them will gather within the Sanctum—a place where the brightest minds and strongest hearts prove that perfection isn’t inherited; it is earned.”
In all that grateful noise, nobody stopped to ask what happened after perfection was found.
The years that followed became known as the Years of Renewal. Roads were rebuilt, fields bore harvest again, and war scars vanished beneath polished stone. At the center stood High Sanctum—a city of white marble and gold spires with seven highways radiating outward like veins. On the morning of its completion, Nicholas Lowbottom addressed the nation across millions of screens: “Perfection is not a privilege. It is a responsibility.” The phrase was carved into monuments, printed on schoolbooks, and recited by children every morning like gravity.
When the first Sanctum Trials were announced, the country celebrated. The first tributes walked into High Sanctum under showers of white petals, welcomed live on broadcast. Seven days later, the first two Victors were announced. Their smiles, courage, and the image of them standing alongside the President were burned into the national memory.
Then they disappeared.
The official story cited confidential government appointments, followed months later by tragic, sudden illnesses. The nation grieved and accepted it. The next year brought new Victors, new celebrations, and new quiet disappearances—lost to foreign research or unmapped diplomatic posts. The Hall of Victors grew, yet no Victor ever aged in it. Portraits quietly faded from classrooms; families received medals in the mail instead of homecomings. Yet every Selection Day, the public celebrated with the same frantic joy, finding hope far easier to carry than doubt.
History rarely remembers the quiet people who notice when the pieces don’t fit. Stephen Hawkins was a historian working out of a dusty office above an old library at the edge of Greed. One wall held maps; the other held twenty-three years of Sanctum Victors, newspaper clippings, reported deaths, and red string connecting things that weren’t supposed to touch.
He picked up a clipping: Victor Amelia Hart accepts distinguished appointment. Six months later: Nation mourns tragic passing following sudden illness. No funeral, no grave. Another: Victor Elias Rowan begins diplomatic mission abroad. No letters, no records. A third: Victor Helena Cross lost beyond the northern borders. But there were no northern borders; the nation ended at the sea. Every thread looped back to the same truth: the Victors never came home.
Opening a leather notebook, Stephen wrote two lines:
Where do the Victors go?
What if none of them ever died at all?
He crossed to the window. High Sanctum glowed in the distance. As lightning flashed past the city, it illuminated something deep in the mountains behind the Sanctum—a second skyline, hidden and whole, before the dark swallowed it again.
He pulled out an old, yellowed map marked with pencil coordinates and three faint words: City Beyond Sanctum. Locking the notebook into a hidden desk compartment, he closed his eyes as small footsteps echoed down the hall—his young daughter’s laughter carrying through the room.
The Sanctum was not searching for perfection. It was collecting it.









I love the plot and dividing nation based on 7 cardinal sins is clever.Story introduce early mystery which keeps me turning pages..I am pretty sure i will keep coming back to read.
Only thing that took me a little aback is name of your character Stephen hawkins but one cab easily get past it once they dive deep in your story
Is it me or I get hunger games vibes from the summary alone? XD
wow really a captivating story