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What is your opinion?
Great potential, too short
"The story has a lot of potential and a beautiful idea, but something that could have been developed over several chapters has been condensed into just a few lines. If the story could be expanded, it would be great. Even if it’s meant to be a short story, what I read was too short to even be considered an introduction."
Good but needs attention.
"Pretty good story but 1. Their wring style sould use improvement 2. They used words like "hell" which they should refrain from using 3. The story was pretty short"
