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Whispers of Bedlam Asylum

"It was very nice to start with leading the story from Blackwell asylum. That was an interesting story, too. The ending of this story was surprising but well done. You kept the identity of him well hidden until the very end too. I kept asking myself who was the crazy genius and what the motive was. Only in hindsight did I slap myself in the head. Thanks for a great read. "

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Mind bending

"I was captured from the start. I loved the way the characters were built and how each detail is clear and precise. I could actually see her disgust of the mush. See the pain and suffering around her. The compassion for the lost souls within the asylum. I was somewhat surprised as to the guilty person was and how they actually caught him. Well, done! This is a great story well thought out and very much worth the read. I look forward to reading more from this author. I expect great works from them. This story should be in print. Great Job. Definitely an attention getter. If you haven't read it then you should."

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Awesome

"Awesome story ,great twists and turns . 👏"

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Bedlam

"I LOVE YOU MARK KING! Next, the time period in London, an insane asylum, and ROMANCE, DANGER, ADVENTURE! MARK IF YOU READ THIS I WISH TO LIVE IN LONDON TOWN!!! SIGNED STUCK IN THE USA [email protected] "

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Excellent work

"Thoroughly enjoy the works of this author. "

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Amazing 💖

"Loved it, the plot amazing, writing style amazing, characters amazing, over all it was a really good book keep up the good work "

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One of the best

"Congratulations to the writer! I don't understand how this story has only a few likes and only two reviews. In my oppinion, this is among the very best stories not just on inkitt but among the best I've read. It grips you from the start with its mysterious beginning and dark Victorian atmosphere. I think that the setting and era in which the action is happening were brilliantly chosen by the writer. Victorian London is among the best choices for a crime/mystery like this. The plot is nicely woven, I couldn't spot loose ends, and the twist was also a very good idea. Just when I thought that the story becomes predictable, the twist came and turned things around. The writing style was also nice. Elegant sentences and short chapters made this story easy to read. There were only a few typo's here and there, but they weren't much of an annoyance. The grammar was also flawless. I'm looking forward to reading more from this writer because this book was top notch. I really, really recommend it to anybody."

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Whispers of Bedlam Asylum

"I enjoyed reading this book from beginning to end. The main character where so real and you could feel their pain being inside the asylum. Being am aspiring writer this gives me hope that I can show my characters the same attention as this writer did. What I did not like was the fact that you do not know what happened to the people who was inside the asylum. If they all got out who was not crazy. Over all this book was awesome and I have posted it on my social media sites. Thank you for wonderful story."

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Great story!

"You write well. Your descriptions are really good and the overall plot is interesting. There are some things that feels a little sketchy. Like the main character's past. You give hints but doesn't go into details. It feels like there is a part one that I should have read. But all in all, it's a good story. I hope you write more. "

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