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The Dragon’s Ash / Echoes of Valoria

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Summary

When the Royal House of Valoria fell in a night of blood and fire, young Prince Johcyl was believed to have perished in the flames. In reality, he was rescued and whisked away to the high crags, where he spent twenty years under the tutelage of ancient dragon guardians—learning to master divine dragon fire, earth-shaping magic, and the heavy burden of true leadership. ​Reborn as a warrior with brass-colored eyes, unmatched power, and the heart of a blacksmith’s son, Johcyl returns to the occupied city of Oakhaven. Joined by Derrick, a loyal veteran soldier who survived the purging of the old guard, and Lysandra, a swift and deadly Sylph archer, Johcyl sets out to rebuild the rebellion from the ashes. ​Rather than relying on brute force alone, Johcyl fights with wisdom, mercy, and strategy

Status
Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Embers of the Fallen Prince

The night the Royal House of Valoria fell, the sky turned the color of bruised iron. Seven-year-old Prince Johcyl hid beneath the mahogany desk in his father’s study, his hand pressed firmly over his mouth. He heard the shattering of heavy oak doors, the slick clash of steel, and the desperate, final cries of his family. Before he could even scream, a stray flame caught the royal tapestry, and smoke filled his lungs. The world went dark.

He opened his eyes to the smell of fresh straw and warm bread.

He was no longer a prince. He was a peasant boy, born to a gentle blacksmith named Aaron and a baker named Elspeth. They named him Johcyl, unaware that the name belonged to a ghost of the fallen monarchy. Though they worked from dawn until dusk, their small timber cottage was filled with laughter, warm soup, and genuine love—a stark contrast to the cold, marble halls of Johcyl's forgotten past. For seven years, Johcyl lived as a normal, happy child, completely unaware of who he had once been.

Until the night of his seventh birthday.

As the moon reached its zenith, Johcyl’s body burned with an ethereal heat. His bones shifted, glowing through his skin like lit embers. Emerald scales sprouted across his arms, his spine elongated, and small, leather-bound wings burst gently from his shoulder blades.

As the physical metamorphosis completed, a sudden, rushing torrent of memories breached his mind. He saw the golden banners of Valoria. He saw his mother, the Queen, smiling down at him, and his father, the King, teaching him chess. He remembered the massacre. He remembered dying.

When the agonizing influx of two lives settled, Johcyl—now a dragon no larger than a house cat—curled up in the darkest corner beneath his bed, exhausted, confused, and overwhelmed.

The next morning, sunbeams flooded the small bedroom.

"Johcyl, sweetling, time for breakfast," Elspeth called out, pushing the wooden door open.

The bed was empty. The sheets were cold.

Panic struck like thunder. Elspeth’s screams brought Aaron running from the forge. Searching the small house proved fruitless. "I'll find him, Elspeth, I promise you!" Aaron yelled, sprinting out into the cobblestone streets.

Hours passed. Elspeth sat on the doorstep, sobbing, her hands stained with flour, wringing her apron in agony. When Aaron finally returned, his face was pale and drawn. He hadn't found the boy, but he brought someone with him: Captain Derrick, a hardened royal soldier wearing the iron crest of the kingdom.

"We need to check his room for any signs of a break-in or wild beasts," Derrick said, his voice gruff but sympathetic.

They filed into the tiny bedroom. Derrick drew his shortsword, his trained eyes scanning the floorboards. He crouched down, lifting the threadbare blanket draping over the edge of the bed.

Beneath it sat a creature of myth: a small, emerald dragon with luminous gold eyes, trembling softly.

"Gods above!" Elspeth shrieked, collapsing into Aaron's arms. "My boy—the beast ate my boy!"

"Back!" Derrick barked, shoving the parents behind him. He raised his blade, its edge gleaming in the sunlight, preparing to plunge it through the small dragon's heart. "I'll slay the monster!"

Johcyl squeezed his eyes shut, terrified. He had died at seven once before; he was not ready to die again.

"Stop." *

The voice was not loud, yet it resonated in the very marrow of their bones. The air in the small room froze. Sunlight suspended in mid-air, and the ambient noise of the village outside vanished completely.

A radiant, shimmering light coalesced above the bed. It was small, yet radiated a power so vast and holy that Aaron and Elspeth instantly dropped to their knees, weeping in awe.

It was the Goddess of the World.

"Put down your steel, mortal," the small, holy voice echoed, wrapping around Derrick like a velvet ribbon. "This creature is no beast, nor did it harm the child. Take the dragon. Guard it with your life, for one day, this kingdom will have dire need of him."

Derrick trembled, his sword slipping from his numb fingers. He opened his mouth, his throat working desperately to ask a hundred burning questions—Where is the boy? What is this creature? Why spare it?

Before a single sound could escape his lips, a gentle pressure clamped his jaw shut. The divinity in the room pressed against his mind—a warm, absolute silence that warned him against curiosity.

"Not a word of this to anyone," the Goddess commanded softly, her presence beginning to fade back into the light. "Not to the villagers. Not to your kin. And above all... not a word to the King."

With a soft hum, the light dispersed. Time resumed. The distant chatter of the market drifted back through the window.

Derrick stood frozen, sweat dripping down his neck. He looked at the weeping parents, who were stunned into silence, and then down at the little dragon. Johcyl looked up at the soldier with eyes that held an uncanny, ancient intelligence—the eyes of a prince who remembered everything.

Without another word, Derrick shed his heavy wool cloak and wrapped it gently around the small dragon. He scooped Johcyl into his arms, hiding him beneath the folds of heavy fabric against his chest.

Giving the silent, grieving parents a single solemn nod, the soldier ducked out of the cottage and hurried through the alleyways, carrying the secret of the kingdom tucked safely against his heartbeat.

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