Enjoyed This!

"Really enjoyed this first chapter to your story. The sequence in the beginning - about a past love of Michael's was interesting. I was a little confused at first; but then realized it was Michael thinking about the past. I like how you brought us into the future with Michael and Alex. I can see Alex as head strong; and Michael trying to temper that and not break his spirit. I look forward to reading about the relationship between Michael and Alex and how this plays into Alex being the chosen one. All in all I thought this was very well done - easy to read; and would love to see what direction you are taking with this. Well done!"