The False Reflection by mARTy at Inkitt
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The False Reflection

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Summary

Some reflections show the truth. Others show the person you fear you are. When a man is found dead in his home, the case seems simple—until an old mirror reveals something impossible. And a six-year-old boy watching from the neighboring house sees someone who shouldn't be there. By the time the final reflection takes shape, it will be far too late to look away.

Genre
Mystery
Author
mARTy
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

The Ending

Death came to the house on the hill. The mirror was the first to see it. The man had already died, but his reflection hadn’t.


The red and blue lights washed across the valley, making everything seem more eerie. Parked outside the house on the hill, the police cruisers kept their beacons spinning, casting a harsh, alternating rhythm across the lawn. The colors cut through the early-evening dusk, washing over the bare tree branches like blood and ice.

Neighbors had already gathered along the property line. They stood shoulder to shoulder, shivering in the settling chill, exchanging hushed whispers. From somewhere at the back of the crowd, a low, muffled crying broke the silence.

The man’s wife sat in the back of an ambulance, wrapped tightly in a silver thermal blanket. She held a tissue to her eyes, occasionally dabbing at them with practiced movements. Her voice trembled as she repeated her version of events to an officer with a notepad. Her husband's car was parked outside the house, half-covered in the fading light.

Inside the detached garage, the air was heavy with the smell of motor oil and cold concrete. Investigators moved carefully through the empty space, their boots scuffing against the dusty floor.

A man’s body lay flat on his back near the center of the room, the rope still looped loosely around his neck, its severed end trailing across the floor where they had hastily cut him down.

A tipped-over wooden stool lay a few feet away, directly beneath the thick central ceiling beam, from which the severed end of the rope still dangled.

“Textbook suicide,” the senior detective muttered, noting the time in his log. “Everything fits. The pressure got to him.”

A younger officer stepped back to clear the lane for the forensic photographer. As he backed away, his eyes caught a large, dust-streaked mirror hanging on the garage wall above a workbench—an old piece of furniture stored away and forgotten. The glass captured the entire space behind him.

The officer glanced at it without thinking.

Then he stopped.

Something was wrong.

He looked from the body to the mirror, then back to the body. His stomach tightened.

In the reflection, the man wasn’t lying on the floor.

The figure was still hanging from the beam, suspended in mid-air above the concrete floor. His arms hung loosely at his sides, and the rope was wrenched tight around his neck, biting deep into his flesh under the full weight of his suspension.

The officer stared at the mirror, unable to understand what he was seeing. There was no movement in the glass.

The reflected man’s eyes were wide and vacant, fixed on nothing—exactly as they had looked before they cut him down. It was like a terrifying glitch in time, the glass stubbornly holding onto the past while the real world had already changed.

A chill crawled slowly up the officer’s spine. He blinked hard and shook his head, trying to clear his vision.

When he looked again, the mirror showed exactly what it should have shown: the body on the floor, the empty garage, the investigators moving around the room.

A cold sweat broke out across his neck. He closed his notepad and said nothing.

Who would ever believe him?


Outside, the red and blue lights continued their rhythmic, silent dance across the asphalt. In the neighboring house, Leo stood at the back window beside his mother, his small fingers curled around the edge of the curtain. His bicycle lay abandoned in the grass below, forgotten the moment the police cars had arrived.

He was six years old and wearing an oversized hoodie, but the cold seemed to be the last thing on his mind. While his mother watched the gathering neighbours and the flashing lights, Leo wasn’t looking at the ambulance or the crying widow.

He was looking at the house.

More specifically, he was staring at the dark, second-story bedroom window.

Leo tugged at his mother’s sleeve.

“Mom? Why is that man still upstairs?”

His mother shifted her attention from the scene outside and followed his gaze. The window was completely dark. There was nobody there.

She rubbed his shoulder, her voice gentle but strained. “The man is dead, Leo. He’s not upstairs.”

Leo didn’t blink. He kept his eyes fixed on the window.

“Not that man,” he whispered.

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awesome first chapter! totally hooked. the kid being able to see the man and the image in the mirror are so creepy and intriguing.

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This was an amazing chapter!!!! I'm hooked already!!!

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