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"It`s very well written. Love the tone that the writer has appart from the characters themselves, The way the plot is developing is also very interesting and you can see that their has been put a lot of thought in it."
Nice and intriguing
"The beginning of the story is very well written. The characters are perfectly portrayed, making it easy for the reader to understand the different natures of Vasily and Max. Also, this first chapter hints at something horrible happening in their town, as well as at the possibility of Vasily and Max becoming its heroes. Max is an amusing character and Vasily is more of the calm type. I look forward to seeing how Max drags Vasily into an adventure, which they will both probably end up enjoying, no matter the grave circumstances of the adventure itself. You write really well. But I would suggest that you do further editing. Start from the summary."
