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A warm, loving story

Mirabella was certainly up for an adventure after leaving home. Meeting Evan is the good part of that adventure, since it means that they can go through everything together, be it good or bad. And they have certainly had their fair share of adventure. Their destinies were quickly intertwines and something great came out of that. The story is easy to read and it has a great flow. It is dynamic, which keeps the reader attentive and interested. I must admit that I did not expect this kind of an epilogue, but it really made me smile. I have really enjoyed reading this.

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Absorbing

The story starts with contemplation about magic and monsters. There is no doubt that we have all at some point wondered whether magic exists, whether monsters are real and whether we could see a world different than this one. Maybe, just maybe, this book will allow us to see that world and dwell in it for some time. The character wants to die and join her family. Given that she keeps repeating that “THIS TIME” nothing will stop her, it means that she has already tried to die once. What will happen when she tries the second time? I cannot wait to find out. I hope you will publish more soon.

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Intriguing

From the summary, I can guess that this will be a loving story, with a couple of motivational elements. I love the easy flow of your story and your style of writing. I learned a lot about Sloane from the very first chapter. You have portrayed her as a bad-ass heart-breaker who is always late to her appointments and whose actions are most certainly the result of being abandoned by her father as a child of six. I cannot help but wonder how much Sloane will change throughout this book and what role her old friend will play in that process. I cannot wait to find out.

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Loved it

The story starts off as an ordinary tale about a guy who cannot find his place in this world, a guy who feels trapped and senses that here is not where he belongs. Everyone can relate to that, since we have all had a feeling of not belonging somewhere, at some point in our lives. However, the story quickly turns into something very different. Could this be the world where dreams come true? Or is it rather that everything came true before even being dreamt? Any reader who is curious about this topic should read this book. I felt a bit sad at the end of the story, while Cepik was reading the letter. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Liked it

This is a very unusual story, but one that is worth reading. The characters are intriguing and mysterious, starting from Bonnie and Boris in the Prologue and continuing onto Ralf and his Nirvana. The very title of the story is ambiguous, which must hint at the whole story itself. The plot is dynamic and enjoyable. Given your nice style of writing and the flair you add to your paragraphs and Chapters, the story keeps the reader attentive and interested. I have enjoyed this story immensely so far and I look forward to reading the rest of it after it is published.

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Thrilling

This futuristic story is written in a very amusing way. It is more than simply a fantasy story. It is a fantastic fantasy story. The adventures that Dr. Gale goes through in order to save himself, and later on his new entourage, are amazingly written and depicted. I felt like I was on this exciting adventure with them myself. There was a sense of danger lurking around every corner and you have made me fear even when there was no reason for it. You never know what might happen in these thrilling chapters you have written. I have really enjoyed this and I hope to read more soon.

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Astonishing

This is a story well worth reading. I felt as if reading a true masterpiece. Judging by the style of writing of this author, there is no doubt that the whole story will be amazing. Combining different techniques, narrations, stream of consciousness etc., the author creates not merely a story which interests you to see what is going to happen, but also a story full of wise, smart and deep thoughts sprinkled across it. The point of any story is not to have a powerful message in the ending, but to have powerful messages throughout the whole story. You have succeeded marvelously in this. I have thoroughly enjoyed this.

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Nice and intriguing

The beginning of the story is very well written. The characters are perfectly portrayed, making it easy for the reader to understand the different natures of Vasily and Max. Also, this first chapter hints at something horrible happening in their town, as well as at the possibility of Vasily and Max becoming its heroes. Max is an amusing character and Vasily is more of the calm type. I look forward to seeing how Max drags Vasily into an adventure, which they will both probably end up enjoying, no matter the grave circumstances of the adventure itself. You write really well. But I would suggest that you do further editing. Start from the summary.

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Unusually enjoyable

I love it when a sci-fi story can make you believe every word the author writes. This is exactly what this story does. And although fantastic stories are not my cup of tea, I really enjoyed it. I did not expect it to be so thrilling, dynamic and so enjoyable. I love that it has a touch of mystery to it. I loved the ending; it was kind of solemn and intriguing. I hope that you will write more, because I would love to hear more about Talmido. I also have to commend your style of writing. You know how to write professionally, but also to appeal to your readers. I strongly recommend this story.

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Loved it!

This is a thrilling story. I love how mysterious, exciting and even shocking at some points. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I could not stop reading it once I began. Your descriptions are charmingly nice. The characters are depicted nicely; you can really understand them and get to know them by reading the story. And you can even relate to some of them. Overall, I have enjoyed this story very much and I would give my recommendations for it. The story does seem unfinished though, but I guess that means that there will be more to this story, which I am happy about.

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Perfect!

Wow! I adore this story! This is something everyone can relate to. It is a story about life. It is everything in one book. You have done a great job by writing this. The story is gripping, dynamic, the plot is intriguing. Everything happens so fast, you cannot get bored. The style of writing and the whole idea behind this story keeps you interested. I am impressed, amazed. I simply cannot find the right words to explain how I felt while reading this. There are some stories in which descriptions are dragging, tedious. This is not the case here. I love how you write, I love your descriptions, I love everything about this story. I strongly recommend this story to everyone.

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Moving

The melancholy present throughout this story has the power to influence and etch into the minds of the readers, to stay there and refuse to leave even after they have finished reading the story. This is a deep, powerful story, making the readers wonder about everything – about love, about their existence, about life in general. I felt like I was in some kind of a dream while reading this, a dream of the Professor, to be more precise. It was very saddening, melancholic and it really moved me. I read it in one breath. Your style of writing is amazing, full of intricate but authentic descriptions, wise comparisons put together into wonderful sentences. This style is visible from the very beginning of the story, showing that this is a serious work, and that you are a great author. I loved the contemplation on cigarettes and the comparison to death. This is a beautiful, moving and touching story.

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Great details

First of all, the technical level of the story is good. Grammar is on point and the story is readable and understandable. You decided to let the readers know Piper’s origin from the very first chapter. This makes the story dynamic and intense from the very beginning. Although, the title itself reveals that information, so it would have maybe been a bit odd not mentioning it in the first chapter. You have chosen an interesting topic and provided a lot of details which fit the story perfectly and that shows that you have invested a lot of time in the story. I also get the sense that you’ve immensely enjoyed writing this. The style of writing is good, the tone adds to the suspense of the situation and the story is so intense that it makes the readers themselves feel the tension and want to read on and on to see what happens next. I think this story would be a great movie, if adapted.

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Compelling

This story is about two young people, each of them with their own issues and problems. Blake dropped out of his high school after his parents died, in order to support his little brother. Alice, on the other hand, is left with the debts of her disappearing father and with people chasing after her to collect them. The story starts off dynamically and by chance, the two characters meet immediately. You have written this beginning very nicely. It is enchanting and leaves the reader eager for more. I am curious to see how Blake and Alice’s destinies will intertwine and how they will cope with their own and each other’s struggles. I cannot wait to read more.

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Great potential

The prologue of this story is kind of dark and mysterious and I like it. It hints at what is to happen and at the destinies of the characters. You start off by providing the background of the two main characters and you do it pretty well. The reader gets to know them through scenes you create. And those scenes feel so alive due to your vivid descriptions and narratives. I could clearly imagine the scenes you have written. I have really enjoyed reading this so far and I look forward to reading the rest of your story. You left me curious about Soren and Isobel.

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Great

Being charged with murder is a serious thing. And when the murdered is your wife, it gets even more complicated. This is not the only problem in Jason’s life. He is in for many more adventures. His character is nicely portrayed, as well as the others. The author has a great writing style. The powerful narratives and even more powerful dialogues make this story extremely interesting. The plot is dynamic and exciting. I felt as if I were living it with the characters. I really enjoyed reading this story and I would strongly recommend it to anyone who enjoys mysterious, fantastic and adventurous writings.

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Nice

The introduction to the story and the setting of the atmosphere is amazing. The descriptions are vivid and lively. Furthermore, your characters are superbly portrayed and depicted. The reader can really get into the very nature of every character. When it comes to Iszeldier, I can understand the decision to find a way to help him. I would not give up on him either. Your story has a nice flow to it and it was really enjoyable to read. I read everything very quickly, because I could not put it away when I started. You have a nice style of writing and I have really enjoyed reading these four chapters.

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Perfect

This is a very good book. The quality of your writing is amazing. You are a great author. And from great authors come great books. The struggle of the characters to accept things, to move on and to live in general is something you obviously perfectly understood before putting it on paper. You have conveyed your ideas impeccably, making the story easy to read. Yet, it should not be taken for granted and simply flicked through. Almost every sentence of yours carries a strong message. This is high-quality writing right here and the book produced from it is well worth reading.

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Saddening and amazing

This is a rather serious topic the author is exploring. It is deep and very important. Emily’s struggles and the fights she had to wage, most times against her own self, are something that many people can identify with. Your writing is amazing. It has a nice flow and brings the necessary drama and intrigue to the table. Emily needs someone to save her from herself. The question is whether anyone would succeed in doing that. She has already been through a lot. I was a bit saddened by the ending, but I guess that is the only way it could have ended.

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Nice

This is a dark, mysterious story. With each sentence, there is a sense of an unknown, dark force looming above the characters, covering and coating them in its arms. The author has made a really great first scene. It gives a nice flow to the story. Your style of writing is great. You make everything you write easily believable, no matter how fantastic it might be. Your descriptions are vivid and I have a sense that your characters will be rather complex. I have really enjoyed this and I hope you write more soon, so that I can continue reading what I believe will become a great book.

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Perfect

Wow! I absolutely love this story so far. You have such a great style of writing and such powerful narrations. With this quality of yours, you could make any story believable. And you did make this one. While reading it, everything was so real and I had a feeling that it was all taking place right before my eyes. You turned words into images. And I love that in an author. The painful destiny of Regan and Grace deserves to be clearly seen while being read. And you provide that. I cannot wait to read more of this story and I think it would make a great movie.

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Pure perfection!

This story is perfect! The mystery, the sense of danger, the obscurity – I simply adore this! I would recommend this to everyone who loves psychological, deep, profound, GREAT mysteries. I simply cannot find words to explain how much I love this story. I read it in one breath. I could not take a smile off my face at certain points of this story, because of how ingenious it is. I am fascinated by how you came up with this whole idea. And you are really great with details. Such a short story, but so full of details – it is simply amazing. This whole story is amazing! The only thing, though, I would suggest is some more editing.

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Great!

I would not say that this story is for children, as it says. In my opinion, it is much deeper and complicated. The story is certainly amusing and thrilling. It is full of suspense and it kept me interested Chapter through Chapter. When I started reading it, I had the impression that it is going to be of a completely different type. But, it soon proved me wrong. I am really glad to have read this and I would recommend it. Sophie is really one of a kind. I also have to speak well of your style of writing. I really enjoyed it. It is gripping, amusing, but with a serious tone to it. You are one of those writers who make every word believable. This is a story with a nice flow and it is well worth reading!

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Great!

This is a true romantic story. It was a bit mysterious from the very beginning. I have soon grown fond of Veronica and I embarked on her life journey with her. I did not expect the story to end the way it did and I felt sorry when Didac died, it was kind of somber. However, I do understand your choice to end it this way. I love your style of writing and I love this whole story. It has a great plot and perfect descriptions. But the way you introduce the characters, by letting them introduce themselves through their words and actions is simply amazing. Great story!

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Enchanting

This is a different kind of mystery from those I usually read. I have to admit that I have never actually read something with a topic like this. The story starts off dynamically, makes you instantly interested, and instantly absorbs you. It kept me attentive at all times, always wondering what is going to happen next. The dismay, worry and anxiety I felt when Mark was about to murder Jessica were simply so real. I started genuinely caring for the characters. And when I found out that Mark is Jake's brother, I was even more shocked and distressed. This was something unexpected. However, I always want to believe that these kinds of stories will have a happy ending and I felt really crushed when reading how this ended. But, you have also left some hope, somewhere between the lines. I have really enjoyed this story.

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Nice

I have really enjoyed reading this. The story is very unusual and mysterious from the very beginning. I love how the whole story is actually the plot. And I love that it gets more and more complicated and gripping with each Chapter. This could be a great TV series. I have to admit that I felt sorry for Arabella in certain situations and I have grown really fond of her while reading this. Furthermore, I love the way you write. It makes the story believable and it made me interested in what you have to say next and how you will say it. Overall, I really loved this story and I would recommend it. I kind of get the feeling that there will be more of this story.

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Nice

This is a kind of an unusual love story. I never could have dreamed that the things that happened to the characters could actually help them renew their relationship, light the spark between them again. But I was very happy that the things evolved the way they did. It gets you thinking that sometimes a kind of an adventure is all you need to actually start seeing again that what you have is worth something. Your style of writing is nice, it has a nice flow to it and makes the story even more interesting and enjoyable. I have read it fairly quickly, which only shows that you have a good way of making your characters interested in what you have to say. I enjoyed this story.

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Warm and comforting

This story is heartbreaking and hopeful. At first, while reading the scene of Julian and Valeria breaking up, I felt sorry for both of them, but most of all about Julian. After all, it was Valeria's choice to end things. Their encounter on the airport was moving and sad, but it turned out to be for the best. Julian's career got between him and Valeria, which is why he decided not to let the same thing happen with Sophia. He took a big step in order to be with her and when she did not show for their flight, I was angry. However, I was sure that she would show up somewhere eventually and I am glad that she did. This is a relatable story, warm and enjoyable. A struggle to find love... It shows that taking risks for the right reasons does pay off.

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Cute

In the beginning, this seemed like a story for children, taking both the topic and the style of writing into consideration. Everything is happening so fast, so the dynamics of the story are undisputable. I must say that you really did make a UNIQUE story. I’ve never read anything like this before. You are an imaginative author, and I envy you for staying this imaginative in your adulthood. The style of writing is very simple and the technical part of the story cannot be criticized. Even though this is as much fantasy as I can take (since I am not a fan of it), I must admit that the story was enjoyable and readable. I could not stop smiling from the beginning till the end. It is just so cute. I believe CUTE is the right word for this piece of writing.

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Bold and interesting

The story might be characterized as “modern fantastic”. The representation of “the future” is not only ironic and fault-finding, but also very critical. Of course, it is highly exaggerated, but I get the feeling that it may well be linked to the truth, even though it is far away from it. The fact that the truth is completely different from this does not mean that it is better. This is an unreal, twisted representation of the world, but the reality is twisted in its own way, however different than this it might be. This is why this sarcastic criticism is actually caused and justified. You are very open with this story, when it comes not only to the language, but also to the topics you chose to explore. It might take a bit of courage to do this, but camouflaging it in humor and sarcasm makes it easier. Personally, I’ve always enjoyed sarcasm. Even though this seems as a humorous, funny story, it actually carries a much deeper meaning. I loved it.

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Nice

This is one of those stories that make you forget the rest of the world and lose track of time while reading it. It is exciting and dangerous at times, but also very soothing and comforting at others. The descriptions are so vivid and realistic. I could imagine every scene of the story. And that is something perfect – when the author’s style of writing consumes you, takes you away on a journey with the heroes. My strong compliments for this. Your style of writing is amazing. I must say that I was hoping that the story would get a bit more dynamic in the beginning, but later on, I realized that this is just the right pace and the right way. The story is very emotional. I have to admit that I am particularly attached to Dan. Maybe it’s just me, always being an animals’ person, rather than people’s person. But I can tell that you are also attached to the “character” of Dan, the horse and I am glad that he plays such an important role in this story. At least it is important from my point of view, but I have no doubt that other readers would see it the same way. Overall, this is a very nice, warm and pleasant story. Strongly recommended.

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Enchanting

The story is very emotional and kind of saddening. Everything feels so real and natural in this story, even the fantastic elements (and there are just about enough of those elements). The descriptions are nice and vivid. I could see and imagine every scene which was written. I loved to hear both Hector’s and Alma’s perspective of their relationship and while I was reading it I looked for inconsistencies in the stories, but find none – which is great. The touch of mystery is always welcome and appreciated in these stories, and you did a great job with the dreams and the jaguar. It was something which FELT beautiful and dangerous at the same time, amazing and frightening.
The technical part of the story is great. The style of writing is to be admired, since it completely puts the reader under a spell, so to speak, making them completely enchanted by the story. Overall, it’s an overwhelming story, well written and worth reading.

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The writing is amazing

This story is full of marvelous, vivid descriptions which made me not only see a picture of what is written, but also hear every single voice and noise and smell every single scent mentioned in the story. It is clear that you are a very talented writer, wise and very, very observant, when it comes to both nature and people. I loved the contemplation about God and religions. It was something not everyone could write, but everyone could feel. This was one of the parts in the novel when I said to myself : “wow, this is a SERIOUS author”. And the story is very serious too, wise and deep. It captured me from the very beginning. I felt almost melancholic while reading it, because that is what this tone of writing does to readers. The style of your writing is great, consuming, tying the readers emotionally to the characters. When speaking of characters, you introduced them so well that I got the impression they are real people while reading – the impression that all the provided information are real, that the story is real – and that made me care even more for the characters. Once again, I must say that I am simply amazed by your captivating style of writing.

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First of all, I love how the story starts with a description of a normal day of a slightly disturbed teenager and then gradually flows into something which makes all Sandra’s “petty problems and grudges” unimportant. The characterization is great from the very beginning, until the end of the story. The readers are able to really “get into the characters”. Therefore, after following Sandra along this whole path, the way her story ends is not so unexpected. But, it is also the only ending that could’ve been written, in my opinion. A happy ending for everyone but her. Which feels right. The versatility of the characters is interesting, but even more is the fact that all those characters manage to function together. You’ve done a great job in ending the chapters with cliffhangers, and the ending of the story makes the readers just stop and think for a minute, think whether the story could have ended in any other way and answering themselves with the same kind of “No” at the very end of the novel. I love how you incorporated the “story within the story” (Maxi and his crew) and then ended up setting all the characters off on the same road. This “story within the story” kept the novel interesting and dynamic, while showing yet another perspective of the apparently hopeless situation. The overall story is very dramatic and really moved me. The only thing I did not like so much was when Sandra slapped Alan. It seemed a bit unreal that he would not react in any way. And yet, it somehow did correspond to his character. The plot is great and the ending is magnificent. When it comes to the style of writing, I have no complaints, I think you’ve done a great job.

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