What is your opinion?
Lynne
"Fantastic story really enjoyable..great plot and characters well done."
Lost in Vegas
"Like a good action novel. Fast paced. Flowed well. Kept my interest throughout. Vegas is always interesting."
Lost in Vagus
"Great story, John is amazing, strong capable, reliable and sensitive except for always breaking arms and hands.lol. At least his victims deserved broken arms. So glad Abie is going to be OK. Thank you, regards Linda "
Lost in Vegas
"This was an awesome read! I love the main character and think you should create a whole series around John Smith if you haven’t already!"
Very good more on john smith
"More hard situation for john Smith in your next sequel"
Very Good Writing
"This is really well written and can be made into a movie. But a lot has been exposed very early on and was not a suspense anymore."
Lost in Vegas
"Great plot, can't stop reading. Thanks for the entertainment. Look forward to another great story soon."
Lost in Vegas
"Good story. Could not put my phone down. I felt like I was watching a movie "
Lost In Vegas
"This deserves to be published. I hope you continue to write🌹"
Lost in Vegas
"Packed with suspense in an excellent writing style. Love the small detail describing a scene. I normally leave comments throughout the story, but was too busy following the suspense. I would like to read more of your stories. Well done."
Lost in Vegas
"Fantastic story! Really enjoyed it!! Very well written!!!"
The story was engaging and full of suspense.
"I liked the plot.It was clearly brought out and scenic.I would recommend this story to people who love adventurous novels and more of action centred."
Lost in Vegas
"This book was captivating from start to finish. You are a fantastic writer. Would love if you could turn this into a series of all John Smith's conquests it's so thrilling."
well done
"This was a very intriguing and engaging mystery, and I'm impressed how you were able to sustain tension for so many chapter. I look forward to seeing if you do more with this same character because he could solve another good mystery. My only suggestion would be to break some of the dialog into smaller bits; there's a few instances where John and Pablo seem to ramble on in perfectly constructed sentences that sound more like third-person prose than dialog. Overall this was a blast though, because the reader actually feels like their in on solving the mystery alongside the main character not just having things explained to them. I also liked how you described the sensory experiences of Vegas and wrote your montages."
Lost in vegas
"Amazing agent.... "
Lost in Vegas
"Absolutely loved it. Everything was on point. I definitely recommend this book."
Lost in Vegas
"Ian Jones has done a stellar job in writing this story. It kept me at the edge of my seat and I read this from cover to cover in one sitting. Great plot, good wrtitng style along with the right grammer and no spelling mistakes. Well done! Cannot belive you have only one story to your credit. Ilook forward to more."
Lost in Vegas
"Good action, short sweet and simple "
Great story
"Super story. But I could not understand why charles betrayed?"
A real page turner
"I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The plot was well thought through, and the story kept moving along at a good pace. The writing style was good. I hope the author will post more of his work."
