Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Review

"Wow I want more. Excellent story. Well written"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Gateway

"Wow! I just want more of this. There's so much to explore that I feel empty when the story ends. I want to know how this parent and child were separated and why the parent can only see the child in the rain. I want to know if the girl knows she can be seen. I want to know what power brings this ill-fated pair together. I want to know if the curse can be ended. I'm just on tenterhooks here! And the story's over. Please write me another, Ms. Carney. I need to live with these characters for a few more restive breaths."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation