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"OMG all the time i was reading i was thinking to myself, nothing makes sense! at one point i started laughing. it seemed that we were in a mirror world where things that would never ever happen were happening one after the other! when all the girls lined in for him to unhook their bras i was laughing so hard. i mean it is any man's dream i guess but it goes against every logical and moral thing. the end had me laughing very hard, and suddenly everything made sense again. good story."

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