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What is your opinion?
A good start
"For the first chapter, I'll say it's a good start. Keep it up."
Suspenceful
"Nice start. It makes me curious and want to know what comes after. Chapters are a lil short, but I personally don't think, its a problem, I liked it. And one thing to look at, well I was confused about, Is how the unknown kept sending him messages, the content of it, especially when you keep adding an exclamation mark, it makes me think, is the stranger in an excited state..? Or...I don't know, it felt odd, there. But apart from that, I think, its suspenseful enough and hope you keep writing. I would want to know what happens next."
